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With You
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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It is so dark.

I keep running my hands
Along the walls of my mind.
Searching for an escape hatch.

My hands are chaffed.
I don’t want to feel nothing.
Not anymore.

© 2009 Sara Coslett

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 Reviews of "With You"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on July 28, 2009
Your poems of late seem to come from a well of trying times. I hope that the sun shines brightly in your world again very soon.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Don't give up the ship. Good times will come again.

Reviewed on July 20, 2009
Powerfully penned sadness - well done, Sara.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 18, 2009
let you hands heal then run them again ...

Reviewed on July 18, 2009
I get the feeling the double negative was intended. Nicely done, Sara.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 18, 2009
Despite the pain and resignation, Sara,
there is escape (i hope) in the skill of
your trusty pen. -gene.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on July 18, 2009

There are times when we face ourselves and turn against what is revealed. You say it well, so now you may return to better views of why you live a full life and keep close friends. - Bill

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 18, 2009
excellent expression-one can feel the angst

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on July 18, 2009
I felt like there were tears between your words. I liked the analogy of your chafed hands and not feeling. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 18, 2009
Sara,
This is hard, strong and dark, a terrible beauty born.
John

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 17, 2009
WITH A FEW WORDS YOU HAVE PAINTED A PICTURE THAT IS CLEAR AND FILLED WITH DEEP EMOTIONAL DESPONDENCY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS


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