Eight days, seven nights
Two trade shows
Back to back
Chicago, Illinois
The Windy City
Husband always there
Day and night
Night and day
Working side by side
Sleeping side by side
Eating side by side
Every moment
Side by side
24 hours a day
Eight days
Seven nights
Not one fight
Just doing our job
Doing our marriage thing
Something must be wrong
We don’t normally get along
Last hour of the trip
Just below the surface
Body started to shake
Tears started flowing
Hysteria settled in
Sadness finally clawed its way out
A wealth of emotions
That damn reality
Stupid useless fantasy
Misplaced love for another man
Bubbled forth
Fomenting temptation
Into my imagination
Desires lonesome ache
Forsaken across the miles
Time to cry
To be alone
So alone
Just lone…
Some
Me
Hey everybody, sorry I haven't been around to read all that has been written. I will try to catch up. All I can do is try.
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Reviews of "So Alone"
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Supergirl you are indeed in every way that and so much more...this powerful feeling write and all else you have done proves just that!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Powerful expression in this!!
Trying to catch up myself...
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Keep things in perspective, pretty lady. Fine work, sad subject is depression.
Peace,
Cherokee
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
when you share part of your life someone your not just sharing words, your doing your part to explain life itself. Thank you
always keep things in perspective, SuperBusy Girl ;)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Well expressed..
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
This was very touching. "Misplaced love for another man". But, as somebody told me and I wrote in one of my poems.....true feelings die hard,
they never really vanish,
just get misplaced or misused.
Maybe that helps?!?!
Love
This was so beautifully sad, just touched me so deeply tonight...
Excellent expression,
Reindeer
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Awesome write, Super Girl!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Hey Supergirl{{Sweetie}}}
This is so raw and real the emotions
that is what makes beautiful poetry
"Misplaced love for another man
Bubbled forth
Fomenting temptation
Into my imagination
Desires lonesome ache
Forsaken across the miles
Time to cry
To be alone
So alone
Just lone…
Some
Me
Hey everybody, sorry I haven't been around to read all that has been written. I will try to catch up. All I can do is try."
Loves Ya Peg
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Trying to catch up myself...
Peace,
Cherokee
Adam
they never really vanish,
just get misplaced or misused.
Maybe that helps?!?!
Love
Much warm love to you okay!!!
Love
Tinka
tony
Excellent expression,
Reindeer
This is so raw and real the emotions
that is what makes beautiful poetry
"Misplaced love for another man
Bubbled forth
Fomenting temptation
Into my imagination
Desires lonesome ache
Forsaken across the miles
Time to cry
To be alone
So alone
Just lone…
Some
Me
Hey everybody, sorry I haven't been around to read all that has been written. I will try to catch up. All I can do is try."
Loves Ya Peg