Funeral pyre laughs with joy (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on October 1, 2003

Lovely imagery, Bhuwan, and exquisite poem overall, except for the occasional bumpy rhythm.

Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Bhuwan....this is perfect. There is an old Yiddish joke that goes something like this: "People make plans and God laughs." Your poem reminded me of it.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Extremely profound words and thoughts expressed here. Great write.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Good write ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Eternal dark expedition of life
Marches ahead in grisly fright
Life is howling for bright light
Afraid is life sans Sun’s light
Love your write
But are you (e) too??
As explained to eileen?
Confusing me ain't you
Love
tinka

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Your poems are beautiful and thought provoking.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

wanted you to know e is me Bhuwan ...sorry for the mistake;-)

Reviewed by e

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

Bhuwan the chilling picture sets the stage...I see the depth of your ponderings as if evil is happy knowing it has us heading for the pyre, while the world is more foe than friend...your writing is excellent and meaningful.

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

"How can I call strangers my foe? " - That's the question everyone should ask themselves - and find that the answer is "I can't." - have to get to know them personally, until you both prove yourselves to each other. That's hard in a world that shoots long range, where faces go unseen, and people are all "enemies" because they share a common name...be it Iraqi or American or any other. Keep spreading the message of love, that's all you can do...and you do it well.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

Emotionally powerful write...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

deep, diverse in an element of darkness...

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

A leap into the depths of your heart. Rivating!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

"Was born to meet ghastly sorrow
Mountains of sorrow is rising still
And tears shed from the eyes
Yet, Happiness I glimpse not."

Bhuwan, this is so very sad..like impending danger....very well written with much emotion..Floria

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

Bhuwan,
Emotional depth in this one.
Peg

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

Sounds confuseing to me... mixed emotions.. times unsure.. I could feel this all.. well done.