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When War
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When war starts,
Life ends and death begins
Light ends and shade prevails
Joy ends and despair begins
For war is the ravenous devil
Born to gulp the balmy blood
And dethrone the humanity
Into the itinerary of disgust

When war starts,
Serenity ends and brutality begins
Affluence ends and dearth prevails
Adore ends and dissension begins
For war is the repulsive venom
Born to obliterate the soul of life
And smolder the heart of love
In the furnace of perpetual strife

When war starts,
Veracity ends and deception begins
Independence ends and anarchy prevails
Appetite ends and starvation begins
For war is the storm of covetousness
Blown by the forest of ascendancy
That deracinates the seeds of love
And barrens the womb of mother Earth

But…

When war stops,
Death ends and life begins
Shade ends and light prevails
Despair ends and joy begins
For peace is the fountain of joy
That revives the snoozing heart
And enshrouds the rhythm of life
With the fragrance of divine love

When war stops,
Brutality ends and serenity begins
Dearth ends and affluence prevails
Dissension ends and adore begins
For peace is the saccharine nectar
Born to nourish the essence of life
And make this discernible Earth
A facsimile of eternal Paradise

When war stops,
Deception ends and veracity begins
Anarchy ends and independence prevails
Starvation ends and appetite begins
For peace is the zephyr of tranquility
Blown by the forest of generosity
That swirls and glides the dark clouds
Of abhorrence, remote from its territory


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 Reviews of "When War"
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
Thank you for this, sweet soul.

Reviewed on March 6, 2003
I loved what you had to say here...so true, and so well done,

Reindeer

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
very nicely written here it was a wonderful poem that speaks out against war nice job opn this

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
ambiguous write Bhuwan
well done
Love Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Mr. Bhuwan, what a masterpiece, of good and evil.
Ecellently Penned

William

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Excellent write.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Wow... with you on this one... so well put BRAVO!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
What a beautiful rendition of the negative and the positive..remarkable write Bhuwan..Clap clap..floria

Reviewed by Thelma Shutters (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
This is a wonderful piece, I just wish our leaders would see what they are about to unfold, this is going to be terrible. Thank You. thelma

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
I echo TRC..your thoughts reflect those of many. A very powerful poem Bhuwan.
Chrissie x

Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Lovely comparison between start and finish. Exceptional write.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Chuwan, This is powerful my friend...
excellent Peg

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Bhuwan, very good poem and insights on war. Excellently expressed.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Nice write Bhuwan.
Jack

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Dear Bhuwan, This was very insightful. I only have to look in my own country, so much strife and yet war has not begun. I can imagine what if there is war.
ty
tony


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