You are always on my mind
and strike a haunting melody
that replays every memory.
When, some star-lit night, lights twinkle
I feel tears falling ... a trickle,
the light you are comes comfort me.
You'll shine within ... eternity.
Unique--you were one-of-a-kind--
a little gem from God's own mine.
When, some lonely night, tears fall down
your comforting spirit comes 'round
and I feel love so intensely.
I know we'll share infinity.
You are always on my mind:
always ... etched inside ... on my mind.
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Reviews of "Always On My Mind"
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
I enjoyed the haunting refrain underlying the tone of this piece. Great imagery and engaging writing and flow. Well written.
Reviewed by Justareader Offinework (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Beautifully written.
Peace
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2003
Wonderful write .....moving.
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2003
Sad, but a beautiful poem. (((hugs)))
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2003
your comforting spirit comes 'round
and I feel love so intensely.
I know we'll share infinity
...such a wondrous truth! Ty
Vesna :)
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
This is remarkable. May your heart live and live well. Blessings and as always....excellent work.
Reflections and Nature Watercolors is a collection of Margaret's spontaneous positive thoughts in celebrating and reflecting on life and her nature watercolors.
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Peace
and I feel love so intensely.
I know we'll share infinity
...such a wondrous truth! Ty
Vesna :)
Thank You,
Emilie
>tears <
with much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :(
beautiful tribute to doug; may you always have beautiful memories of him!
i'm so sorry for your loss
beautiful, heartmoving tribute to your son
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :(