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Your Fried
by Nancy D. → (All Poetry by Nancy D.)
  
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Weeks have gone by
Everyday I see changes in you
Your not yourself
Your laughter no longer is there

Your eyes in a trance
Few words are spoken throughout the day
Your like a robot
Buttons being pushed

Do this, do that, do this, do that
Commands from all sides
No time for yourself
No time to be you

Its clear to me its not just stress
Your mind and body are "fried"
You need to step back and take a good look and see what I see
My heart aches to see you like this

Nancy
03/19/2003




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 Reviews of "Your Fried"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2003
Written by the hands of a true poet now days many people stand on the brinks of being fried the signs are exactly how you described this is an explosive write great piece I love and enjoy your poetry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
hope your friend realizes how much you care

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
The nature of life .. fine write .. fine read J & J

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2003
This is a slice of life, I've been like this and seem ones I loved like this, stress kills. Great poem.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
being a friend means telling the truth even when it hurts, you are a good friend and I hope your friend listens to you. Good write.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
your genuine concern really shines through in this write

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
Good write Nancy.
Jack

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
Very moving Nancy...a good friend will tell it like it is...

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
Last time I told someone that, they stepped back and never came up again....lol

Hugs,
The Voice

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
So hard to slow down.. Harder to watch a friend stress to this limit.. Thanks for the great read .


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