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Black Indo Eyes
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Rosina, Rosina. Black piercing Indonesian eyes

Black Indo Eyes It was midnight, the moon hung high Reflecting in coal black eyes She had innocent lips Which I wanted to kiss She saw through my disguise. Inviting her in To my heart was not hard She walked willingly through the door She lay by my side All through the night By morning she begged for more. In a whisper she asked Her voice, soft, and low, “How will I know How will I know How will I know when to go?” Dark eyes pleading And both bodies needing. Stark honesty hung in the air “How will I know, How will I know, How will I know when to go?” Her kind, gentle soul In me found a hold. She no longer wants to know Its been fifteen years And I want her here I never want her to go. © 2007 Dayvid Graybill

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Reviews of "Black Indo Eyes"

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

This is lovely. I like how you wrote this work.
hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 31, 2010

lovely!

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on May 29, 2010

So sweet, sincere, and endearing. Very nice, J'nia

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 29, 2010

So sweetly written, such a lovely beginning...
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 29, 2010

As long as you do of her remember, she will never be too far gone...e

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on May 29, 2010

Great write! While reading this I visualized one of those dark films from the 40's & 50's. A black & white film, set in Jakarta, filled with mystery and intrigue.

Cheers,
Dan

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