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No Lucky Stars for You
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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No Lucky Stars for You

 

I shoulda seen it coming

But then I shoulda guessed

You didn’t give me anything

Your heart didn’t possess

 

The day on the train

You kept showing me your scars

In the night we were moving

I had no lucky stars

 

December cold snow fell

held you warmly in my arms

You had no secrets left to tell

Your lips had lost their charm

 

Watching you walking to forever

From the window in the door

No tears or sadness flowed

Good-bye to you forevermore.

 

© 2007 Dayvid Graybill


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 Reviews of "No Lucky Stars for You"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on June 23, 2010
"You didn't give me anything your heart didn't possess"...I love that line! This is bittersweet and heartfelt. Excellent! ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on June 23, 2010
You have captured the bittersweet in 4 stanzas. Love the December cold.

Reviewed by Jason Wise
Reviewed on June 22, 2010
excellent poem

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 16, 2010
well written, i enjoyed it!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 15, 2010
An important and sometimes difficult step....well written piece.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 15, 2010
This is one well written poem, with depth of emotion..
Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on June 15, 2010
Well written.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 15, 2010
Sometimes denial
takes awhile
to run its course
But when goodbye
means goodbye
the heart is at its source

Patrick

Reviewed on June 15, 2010
I find this offering as clarity
it is a very good feeling to let go of someone
especially if they are walking away from us
I must say too I absolutely Love this line:

"You didn't give me anything
Your heart didn't possess"

Love Gets Better With Different Stars
Vickie

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 15, 2010
Such a cold parting...the trouble is in showing scars is just not enough...we've got to earn those scars' right to moving on, then and only then will they melt a little deeper into the skin and not be so visible...Hello to you forevermore, Dayvid.

Love and Lucky Stars,
Sage

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 15, 2010
Very sad write...e


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