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The Internet’s Down
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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An out-of-control ex-wife sometimes puts out-of-control thoughts in one's head.
The Internet’s Down The internet’s down Don’t know what to do Can’t pay my bills Can’t talk to you. Running late for work Can’t find my car Rain outside my window Don’t know where you are. Wife’s on the streets Standing on the corner Making lots of money On my way to California The beaches are calling Waves curling high Board on my roof Bikinied girl at my side Sex with her doesn’t count Because it’s you I want But you’re not with me And she’s damn hot! The internet’s down I want to talk to you You make me laugh I never feel blue Please believe me I want only you Looking deep in your eyes I see only blue. But the internet’s down And you are not here She looked like Paris Hilton And she bit me on my ear. The internet’s down Paris she wasn’t I kicked her out It wasn’t all that pleasant Wishing you were here I want to make you mine I love how you laugh And make me feel fine Please come to my bed My fingers through your hair And hold you close Watching your eyes so blue and fair. © 2007 Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed by Jeff Neuman-Lee (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2010

I liked it. Sort of like lyrics to a song, man.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on June 26, 2010

The weather is here, wish you were beautiful. Take that Paris! Patrick

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 23, 2010

did you go down-town Dayvid
since the internet was down
how low can we go (that dance)...lower that pole usher!
stretchin back arms balance out...walkin & shakin & groovin
Vickie

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

The internet=The Electronic Umbilical cord. A bummer when it snaps. J'nia

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

interesting-and a statememnt on how the interenet is relied on

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 22, 2010

Thanks for the smiling this morning, Dayvid.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Neil Diamond said "Thank the Lord for the nighttime, forget the day." ... could be a revival going on here with Jan and Dean and the Beach Boys and Paris Hilton's bikini line...does she wax, dude! Surfin' Safari Internet never went down so good!

Love and Sea Spume,
Sage

Reviewed by pat medlin

nice write....about someone with serious problems...way beyond the internet being down

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Hilarious Dayvid, leavened with plenty of yearning and humor!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jason Wise

It seems like you've taken a moment or a feeling and conveyed that well with your words.