Fascinating twist ending to a clearly told tale. I love your direct voice and openness to the reader sharing your musings. Beautiful piece. Thanks for sharing.
I love the way this is written, and I especially like your last four lines, but in reading the reviews, I, too, have to say that I agree with Peter and his take on this. In any event, I love the way that this is written.
I see this as something else entirely. And I totally relate. Something that has to do with the creative, poetic heart. Some kind of atavistic streak which runs inside people like you, people like me. We're sensitive, needy, demanding. And we destroy any poor soul who comes in our path. We inflict pain, we feel it ever so deeply. A never-ending see-saw of raw emotion and explosive instability. Please pardon me if I'm wrong; but that's where I connected into this incredibly honest piece of writing.
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GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Blessings,
Christine
I want to fall asleep in your arms
You warned me
As you poured on all your charms
I know this because I live it in very much as you express and thus I hugely appreciate your verses, Dayvid. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis