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Man in the Empty Suit
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He wakes up in jail minus a name,
wearing a maculate white linen cassock,
lace cuffs blemished with forgotten indiscretions.
Staring from the discolored glass above the sink,
a man he’s never seen in the declivity of life.
Inside his head the discordant refrain
of a sacramental bell.
 
He’s embosomed by a woman he doesn’t know,
radiant in her splendor.
She pays his bail, exchanges his
polluted cassock for a lavender knee-length suit,
suggesting he’s taller than he ought to be.
She leads him from the cell to a harbor town
he’s never seen, chanting a ballad
he’s never heard in a language he doesn’t speak,
accompanied by an unseen psaltery.
 
Fiat luc, she cries.

Stunned by a coquelicot sun
bathing the town in a scarlet orange tint, he
stumbles in his obliquity, his departure from reason,
to an unfamiliar wharf.
The lucent woman unfurls her wings,
seizes his hand, guides him through the gulls,
hangs him from a yardarm.

Who am I? 

the pitch of his vocal pyrotechnics
measurable on the Richter scale.
You, she whispers, are the son of a sea nymph
who communicates entirely by spindrift and ripples,
an outcast who sidles through the stings
of puling vipers,
the flaming tongues of evangelic fossils,
the bluster of misanthropes,
seeking sanctuary behind parapets of silence--
the mark of quidnuncs and cranks.

He has no idea what she's talking about.

She tells him he is the figment of a whim,
the indulgence of his imaginings,
then vanishes in a sphere of sunlight.

He discards his abbreviated suit,
retreats into a one dimensional world
in which he wonders if he is real,
reading a J.D. Salinger novel
yet to be written.
 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Man in the Empty Suit"
Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
A very rare piece of gripping and imaginative writing. Your brain is in overdrive, and your readers love it.

Am trying to catch up after my bout with staying alive. It seems to working well. Today, I feel great and want to celebrate. Thanks for your concern, my good friend. - Bill


Reviewed on October 23, 2008
Oh yeah! I love this one too! Lavender - was that in the "purple" poem? Can't remember -- So many good lines here for so many poetic-device reasons. Plus, the whole theme --- I have to comment further when I get the time --- the ending is a winner. Endings are SO important. I can't begin to take on the kudos for all the phrases and words I love here. I will do so, though, I'm writing myself an email. Yes, I like this poem very, very much, beginning to end. Thank you for posting it; I love imagery, I love unusual words which are not gratuitous, but are necessary for the meaning, and I love poetic devices (alliteration, assonance, all forms of rhyme) that drive a poem. And I favor free verse with judicious use of rhyme. A winner here. ......................kudos, G.

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Gene - Enjoyed the rich surrealistic images and sounds. Dreams images that morph into reality, but still the doubt that its real or a dream, or both. - David

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
At the risk of sounding blatantly effusive, this is brilliant poetry. It is my new favorite of yours. Reading this makes me want to be a better poet, a more creative thinker, the highest version of my artistic self. I am completely impressed and will be placing this one under my "favorites" list.

Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Gene
Marvelous Word Smith Is he That Can Capture The Intrige of Poetic Stories as in the captivating flow of "Man in the Empty Suit"
Much Love To You...Word Smith!!
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie



Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
feels like a dali painting. .. .
a pocketed visage of yester's ruins combined with anachronistic voices; of self, of soul, of surrealism. . .. . in the words of the late mr buckley, 'ahhh, this was so real'.. .it makes you taste the scenery, feel the words, know the impenetrable body of wor.l.ds as jsut a veil. . .. worn thin and ready to be lifted, kissed and wrapped delicately about the dream; how is it you amke unreality better?

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Outstanding,excellent writing sweetie.....have a wonderful and safe day..Hugsssss...much love too you Gene...xoxo

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
So many images, words, concepts came to my mind as I was reading this remarkable piece. Metaphysics, surrealism, paintings of De Chirico, Magritte, or simple questions about myself, my own identity... This is what happens when one reads good poetry/literature: The reader becomes part of the work and the work penetrates the reader's world.

Axilea

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
you've harvested a magnificent crop of creative poetry -- bravo! -- did I say, bravo? -- I opened the book of great poetry -- and it was written there -- play it again Sam, er um, Gene -- peace my friend and send us more of your terrific poetry -- JMW

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
Applaus...applause...you mesmerize me with your ability to mesmerize me;-) Superb work, Gene,I read it with deep appreciation for your gift,and thank you for sharing it with us...

luv,
et

Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
The imagery is phantasmagoric, and transplants the reader into a fantasy land.

Reviewed by Glenda Bixler
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
Comment: Whew...you do go out into the realms of fantasy! Strangely enough, it reminded me somewhat of a tale I once wrote, but my nymph stayed on earth thereafter...and if she spoke, it was to herself...lol

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
You are getting so close to that masterpiece if you haven't done it already. I don't want to give it to you so soon for fear you'll stop writing. Fantastic write which leaves the reader wanting more. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 10, 2008
Gene, this is wonderful...but that last stanza...I love it!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 10, 2008
Gene,
I see this as construct and characterization, personae brought to life in the world between dreaming and waking, deliberately placed in both realms, an exploration of what's real and what could be...and that Catcher in the Rye (the sequel) ending rounds it off beautifully.
John

Reviewed on October 10, 2008
WOW, Gene, incredible, multi-layered genius! Have to read this several times over to get the hidden meaning - feel like I've entered the "Twilight Zone!" Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 10, 2008
Very interesting and intriguing tale that leaves one in wonder....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 10, 2008
I love this-- I get it on a metaphorical level (hope that was inteneded)-- something like "Stranger than Fiction" comes to mind. My man wanders around behind my mind's bars, contemplating his own plot. And when I write, he sometimes tells me off. --Charlie

Reviewed on October 10, 2008
Fantastic Write. Held my interest all the way, following its hidden meaning.

Mary

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on October 10, 2008
BRILLIANT write indeed, Gene!!! Subtle meaning in this one!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2008
Gene I hope you never nail your feet into one place...it would take so much away from your writes....Great read Gene

Reviewed on October 10, 2008
I like this one, Gene. A LOT!! EXCELLENT!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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