Gear Play (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2004

I agree with Regis "GO GIRL". I can't wait for the next one...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2004

Looks like you're cruising in 5th, hope you stay well lubricated:)

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2004

Now that locomotive is running in full force, kidding!!! Nice writing, Anita!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2004

OH YEAH!!!!!!
You rock ;)

Lady A~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

Lady AAAAAAAAAAAA you are cooking on all 4 burners!Electrify the night!;-)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

You go, girl!!! You've got the energy. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

your gears are lubricated with high intensity oil ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

Zooooooooom! Vavooooooom! That's what your marvelous poem did to my tired old sagging heart today. You got ME out of neutral, and I know after I read this great stuff that you sure aren't in neutral. Good, very good, stuff.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

Girlfriend...you are never stuck in neutral..
this is awesome....Now as for myself...I have
run out of gas...LOL...floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

I can relate Anita!!

I totally lost my gears...!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

At my age gears have been replaced and about wore out again. Love the pic with this and many times I have just sat here spinning my gears wildly not moving one inch.
glad you took this out of the closet and let us enjoy it
Have a great weekend
Tommy

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

Powerful and creative poem, well done!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

can i join you in screaming right now?? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!

i hear you; we are both struggling now! we are also keeping brandon in our prayers; he is on the prayer list at church, as karla said! you are too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

(((lady a)))

rant on, lady a, rant on--and let me join you in that primal scream

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

excellent emotive write--i feel ya!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

brandon's in my prayers and on the prayer list at church

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

This poem does not indicate - in the least - that you are stuck in neutral; quite the contrary.

And once again, your quote is fantastic; I have felt that way - many times!