I Yearn To Hold The Air (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2006

Love your work..
so glad you're back..
please don't ever leave..YAY!!

Vesna

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on April 18, 2006

Wonderful !!!
Amira

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2006

much is heard within the sighhhh

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2006

Dear Anita,

You do hold the air! Even now, I can envision your chest heaving as you inhale and exhale The Light of Love.

Blessings of Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 1, 2006

Sigh indeed, Anita! This is beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2006

Have to agree with Jerry...this one bears reading over and over.
I love the images it puts in my head...and the graphic is perfect.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 31, 2006

Well, we all KNOOOOOOOOOOOOW you've bin hogging your share of air cos there has been the most tremendous VACUUM while you've bin gone, Sweetheart!! NO-ONE else does this lyrical and most poised of lilting rhyme that also packs one helluva lotta punch at the same time... no-one!!! Your beauty and skilled penmanship have been lacking here. It's not just your poetic craft, but your concepts and mouldings of the mind that have been missed, too. But I am very grateful for all that you have sent on to me, and have loved every single one of them. Bless you for continuing to do that. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Just magical....love it!!

Now don't be greedy okayyyyy!!

Love Tinka :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

Beautiful write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

A blissful mystic concoction Anita! Sorry but you can't have my share of air;-)...Brilliant poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

I got blurry reading this :*) Beautiful my friend! :)

Jack

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

Anita
I agree with Jerry below, this is a very mystical and metaphysical composition, and stands up well to being re-read several times for more definitive understanding..
You rock Anita !
Peter

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

"A trail of whispers from the mind..." is such a sweet love filled line that washes over me like a warm wave. Beautiful my sweet friend, beautiful.

Felix

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

Lady A,

This is beautifully imaged and penned--sublime! This is what poetry is supposed to do. Leave the reader wanting more. And I do!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

I truly believe we have knowledge of those secrets before birth, but as you allude to they are veiled from us when we enter this world. I remember as a child thinking I was orchestrating the wind by waving my hands. To one so young it seemed possible. It is tempting to want to hold the air within your hands and be privy to the universe. Something tells me tho that our minds couldn't handle or grasp it.
This write is soft as air, Anita. Quite beautiful! And the graphic is stunning...

Lin

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

This is such a poem that it bears rereading, then again. It holds mystism within its structure, but the realism of the words are too important to be shunted away. Very good.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

that yearning for oneness underlies all expressions of devotion and connection, one to another, all to all...soulful expression, poet.