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Will They Learn To Pray or The Witches
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There is a mighty lot of difference between saying prayers and praying. --John G. Lake


 

Will They Learn To Pray
The Witches
 
Three shadows in the moonlight
In crisp November slice
Disappear then solid
Once, then twice, and thrice
 
A song upon the moonlight
A chant upon the wind
Chiller than January
Of a blizzard's din
 
A circle of six hands
Met on fingertips
Round the trio dances
Wild on the skip
 
Chanting there in secret
For they've a mighty need
A spell of pure forgetfulness
They dance for as they plead
 
They mixed a drought of berries
Along with honey sweet
Some wine to make the merry
Then crushed the the harvest wheat
 
Then drank from crystal goblets
Carved from river ice
Asked the icy waters
For crystalline advise
 
Asked the wind and forest
For powers they believed
Would magically erase
The pain that made them grieve
 
Implored the barren earth
The moon and diamond stars
The seasons and the cycles
To heal their tightest scars
 
 
And if the spirits grant their wish
Wiping all away
Will the silence drive them mad
 
Or will they learn to pray
 
Pax
A
8/06


 
 


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 Reviews of "Will They Learn To Pray or The Witches"
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
OMG- I love this! The imagery stands right OUT! IN your face.... I love the mystery I felt while reading and the choice of words are Beautiful!!! HuGs, Sheee

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2006
mmmm..this is intriguing work..you've outdone yourself Pax...


Vesna:)

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
The mystery of witches and the wonder if they will learn to pray; Perhaps dependent on whether they are "good or bad" witches???
Thanks for sharing this excellent and engaging poem. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
Haunting in its rhyme, rhythm and content!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
Excellent piece
imagery impressive
Enjoyed reading

William
Love & Peace

Reviewed on August 28, 2006
Wonderful imageries!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
Graphic image and verses complement one another most effecitvely. I appreciate the disciplined approach to the rhyme and rhythm as well, Anita. Very nicely done indeed! Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
Shakespeare would have been proud of you for this.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
Excellent! You handle rhyme so well. . .an enviable talent that most often comes from practice. Discipline and the ability and desire to
listen. Very interesting suject, very well handled, as well.
Bravo!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
Anita

When we find our own way of praying and worshipping, then we have made our niche in this transitory world, and developed a " Hotline " to God..

And that is a groovey, surreal graphic..

And ya...jump aboard the wagon...lol

Love
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 26, 2006
Another creative magical wonder from you Anita!

Eileen

Reviewed on August 26, 2006
WOW, Lady A, what a thought provoker you've penned! Most excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 26, 2006
Such a deep thought provoking piece...words that will lingered for the longest time...asking myself...whats the difference saying a prayer and praying!!

Thanks for sharing sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 26, 2006
Silence can often drive many mad. Quite a poem, Queenie!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 26, 2006
This is one of the most striking poems I have read in a long time. From the graphic that captures the imagination at once and shoots the reader into the scene at once to the ending where the question of morality to decide between wiccan like religion of nature of man made religion of church this is one gripping write Anita. You have captured the very essence of the Druids soul in this work. I love it.

Felix

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2006
-When shall we three meet again in thunder, lightning, or in rain? When the hurlyburly 's done, when the battle 's lost and won-


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