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Asteral
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Asteral As I close my eyes so tight, and let my spirit drift I shed this earthly body, and all it holds herewith I give my spirit to the winds, of life's cerebral plane As I look back upon release, only my shell remains Drifting through the cosmos, towards what has been before Seeing clear past midnight skies, divine celestial tour To a world, I've never touched with my earthy hands Such a noble elegance, where only thoughts transcend A kelioscope of colors, fanned across the sky Glowing folds of rainbows, hues a vivid dye Waters calm and peaceful, resting on cool shores A heaven for a tired soul, where strength can be restored pax A 6/20/01

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 28, 2009

This is an awesome write, Anita. I am a fan to many writers in the Den, but you are one of few I feel writes most similar to me. This is one I wish I'd written:) Your talent shines here. Not a word out of place. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on December 22, 2009

Anita, poetry to sate the soul with -- the words trouble, woe and conflict do not exist in the lexicon of your free drift in space -- very beautiful -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 20, 2009

So wonderful to see you back with such an uplifting and inspiring write, Anita. Your beautiful lyric and visuals transport us to higher planes of body, mind and spirit and enable us not only to dream, but to SEE. Your art must be transcendent these days. Seasons greetings and love always, Kate xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 20, 2009

Peaceful and serene--the best kind of poetry.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 19, 2009

It is wonderful that the human mind accompanied by heart and soul can take a trip like this whenever we really feel the urge just by closing our eyes.

fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 19, 2009

i would love to be able to go to this place--seems that i am slways overly busy in my mind as well as body--i like this!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

That is some wonderful journey, Anita. Thank you for sharing it via your verses. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

This canvas is one of beauty and solace. The heavens have a spectacular way of creating for a true artist. This you are and I bow to your creativity.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

ASTRAL indeed!
And " a kaleidoscope of colors, fanned across the sky"
is a lovely image. A special persuasion in this special write!
Hope all is well!
Happy Holidays Anita ...
richard

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Reminds me of the aurora borealis, Lady A - beautifully penned and illustrated. Well done.

(((HUGS))) love and Merry Christmas!, Karla.

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