Velvet Petals (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2012

What a beautiful way to capture the tenderness and texture of a kiss one to the other

Di

Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2012

This is lovely Lily, how sweet the way you describe the touch of lips

Edith

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on June 22, 2012

Nice blend of innocence and sensuality!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 16, 2012

Thank you for sharing this lovely offering that awakens the emotions, Lily. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2012

They brush my cheek caress my soul
Warmth doth draw me in their folds

Exceptional lines..
LOVE it!
..am saving this one..thank you Carolee!

Blessings,

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2012

What an exquisite way to describe the tenderness and warmth of a kiss Lily

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on June 5, 2012

This is so delightful that I can actually smell the roses.

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on May 28, 2012

I am more fond of roses than any other flower. So much beauty, soft, fragrent delicate and still with thorns. You make me want to kiss a rose.

Stay well and keep writing
Eddy

Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2012

My dear lady how eloquently you surmise the loveliness and beauty of a kiss. How enchanting the tenderness you evoke.

I bow to you with tipped hat

Cyrano

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

You capture the essence, delightfully!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Asa Seeley

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

this took me there and i don't read too many of these...you understand why(smile). thanks for the share

asa

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Reviewed on May 23, 2012

How sweet Carolee, all of life's sorrows and beautiful joys can be witnessed in any individual thing that lives. And this velvet petal lives in your being, covering the shape of your heart, and laid out like blankets on the beaches of your soul.

Namaste'
dan

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2012

Poetry in its purest form. It tastes sweet as honey, it even sticks to your palate. Pure enjoyment !!!

Beautiful work Carolee

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2012

Carolee, Very beautiful and erotic...

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on May 22, 2012

Lily,
If you could see here it is a standing ovation.
Budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on May 22, 2012

Nice poem.