Hold yourself within the shadow of another to become one soul ~Lily of Lough Neagh~
For where have I been but to wrap myself within your image as your shadow casts itself sublimely I am held breathless within your soul
Held sweetly within your folds
as the sun sets I impart myself within
captured unto your warmth
two images become one heartbeat
We fill ourselves with warm breath
entwined in sweet fragrance engaging in our love
until nights flower closes our petals
by moon shadows sweet surrender
Where upon morning dew will kiss
velvety skin in her morning luster
as night's stars fade upon the rising orb
and Earth beats her gentle breath upon us
Mystically engaging... ...and so very romantic, Carol. I am a big fan of romance even though some people seem to have lost its meaning somehow. Love and serenity to you,
xo Regis
Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2013
You dear lady Lily are one of the most romantic souls I know. This is one of many demonstrations of your romantic heart
Carol, Love is many things and takes many forms...you show this within your poetry giving us a beautiful picture of love every time you write all the aspects of falling in love
When two lovers feel the fire, passion and desire to be one heartbeat, they are on the road to understanding how powerful love can be.
Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2013
I agree with the poetess Jane, you have a style that resembles Elizabeth Browning. You have a style of your own as well that is unique. You are a writer that continues to impress me with how your words flow in many forms. No-one here can top that from what I've seen.
Another beautiful romance in writing.
Di
Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2013
The ultimate sweet surrender, giving up individuality to merge into one heartbeat, one essence one soul
A declaration of love in its purest and deepest existence.
You must have found this love or this love must have found you Carol
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xo Regis
I bow and tip my hat to you
Cyrano
Love gentle and beautiful in this romance portrayal.
Sweetly unique write of your quilled pen.
Lady Mary Ann
budd
Mark
so beautiful by your pen *Lily*
Lady Vivian
Gail
Ron
Love,
Deborah
Cheers,
Dan
Another beautiful romance in writing.
Di
A declaration of love in its purest and deepest existence.
You must have found this love or this love must have found you Carol
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Love ya!
Jane