The Eyes Have It (poem) by David Maclellan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on September 14, 2010

TOTALLY CAPTURED....SOUNDS BEAUTIFUL...I HOPE IT IS. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2010

The rawness of passion's truth. The need to simply indulge the desire and not have weird consequences attached; a love to completeness and ending. Great show of spirited passion, yet, so, with a rawness that feeds a clear understanding.

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on July 27, 2010

Very well achieved, David

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 27, 2010

Just. plain. great.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 24, 2010

The eyes have it and tell all! You write knowing it.... thank you for sharing... =)

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on July 24, 2010

David, I've been traveling for a spell and just now beginning to catch up. Your last 4 posts are absolutely outstanding. I've been reading your work for a while, but you've really hooked me now. Thanks Dick

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Rich and compelling as dark chocolate, David, and with the touch of its bittersweet sensuality and its power.

John

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

I am not sure if you realize...but this is really seductive
the allurements of passion inside these lines are fire David.

laying scattered at someones feet &
not being able to see enough of them!

The lines are desire & passions all the way...
also: "Don't hurt me, marry me, bury me" WOW!!

Realizations Gifting Bow
Vickie

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

David,

What a very romantic poem for the woman who is the inspiration for it.

Mary

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

She is but a fool to let you go...but David trying to force something only stagnates it..Just manifest it, and let it go, let the Universe handle the outcome..it will be what it is suppose to be..You are a beautiful soul, don't ever forget it..

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

This interesting poem gives that "special person" a look at your inner soul. It also leaves you vulnerable.........! A lucky lady to be cared for this much.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

David, this is so beautiful and pain filled...it's as though the reader can see into your soul.

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

a very impressive poem of abandonment to the power of attraction. much enjoyed.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

What woman could resist a proposal like that? How romantic and blunt I might add....giggle.....loved it, David!

Anna

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

I love your poem --
This is brazen and intense, dark and beautiful ~
Blessings,
Christine