You did Elizabeth Barret Browning proud with this modern interpretation. A refreshing, delightful love poem. I'd say you're in love ;) Hang on to it and never stop showing your appreciation of your special lady. We women need constant reminders. lol
Chanti
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Very nice
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Ha!
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Elizabeth
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Many poets wrote on love and why someone is loved. So you should be bold enough to give your version. Elizabeth Browning suffered and so knew what love can give, yours is a different proposition and so it should be. Poetry comes from the heart. Give it your best and you'll succeed. Personally I liked your poem although some rhymes are not perfect. But that to me is not important. Victor
Enchanted Desire, published by The Wild Rose Press, tells the story of a beautiful young college student, Shanna, who is looking for a fresh start and a way out of a bad relationship. She meets and falls in love with Kenny, a sexy 6 foot 8 Native Ame
Love is universal and not limited to the most perfect among us. In this collection of romantic short stories and poetry, love comes to those who are decidedly imperfect, who possess very real human flaws, scars, and challenges. Awaiting us as we are.
Regis
Chanti
So that's why I haven't heard from you.
You are trolling for skirt...
Smooch...
Elizabeth