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Nice Of You To Try......(Repost)
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Sad to say I'm back here.

Nice of You To Try

You were the sweetest angel of them all,
The last to ever want to see me fall,
But when I did- and put you in the sky,
You couldn’t love me back, but you would try.

I know for you it must have seemed surreal,
Just how much love can anybody feel?
And all for you without a reason why
You couldn’t love me back, but you would try.

My heart shot out its hopes and dreams and wants,
Like safety flares not getting a response-
Oh you were moved enough to even cry...
Just never love me back, but you would try.

I treasure everything that we have shared.
You are an angel, look how much you cared
To guard my dream, though it will never fly
Because you just can’t love me, but you try.

I hope our time has met some kind of need,
And mine will be the only heart to bleed.
But maybe now it’s time to say “Good bye.”
I love you; it was nice of you to try.

John H. Bidwell


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Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 8, 2005
this hurts so much

it cries out to me,..... I wish I had wrote this.. this is so "me"

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
Beautiful John!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
John...sad but true....deep and powerful write...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
It's a good poem, John. Well done, but I hope it doesn't represent your reality at the moment. ~~Nordette

Reviewed on June 10, 2005
John,

Heartwrending plea for love in your powerful, poignant words--and even if you're not happy to be here, I'm glad you're here. So there. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed on June 10, 2005
heartwrenching write, john; i only hope you are okay! you are in my prayers today!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
John, you seem to be searching for love, and i know it is out there, you will find it eventually, if not her...then onward

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
Love is strange sometimes. As the one you love doesn't always love you back as you would like.

Best wishes on finding much happiness and love

Reviewed on June 10, 2005
This is heart-wrenching, you expressed this so well, my heart goes out to you...

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
So lyrical and beautifully written John, but sad, I hope and pray,it's not the present!

Eileen

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Beautiful, my dear friend. You have gone from happy poems to sad. I hope all is still going good for you. You deserve to be happy. God bless...

Huggs, Linda

Reviewed on June 9, 2005
This one can be sung out like a song lyrics. I almost could hear the music in the background. Good job on this one, John!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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