You were the sweetest angel of them all,
The last to ever want to see me fall,
But when I did- and put you in the sky,
You couldn’t love me back, but you would try.
I know for you it must have seemed surreal,
Just how much love can anybody feel?
And all for you without a reason why
You couldn’t love me back, but you would try.
My heart shot out its hopes and dreams and wants,
Like safety flares not getting a response-
Oh you were moved enough to even cry...
Just never love me back, but you would try.
I treasure everything that we have shared.
You are an angel, look how much you cared
To guard my dream, though it will never fly
Because you just can’t love me, but you try.
I hope our time has met some kind of need,
And mine will be the only heart to bleed.
But maybe now it’s time to say “Good bye.”
I love you; it was nice of you to try.
John H. Bidwell
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Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 8, 2005
this hurts so much
it cries out to me,..... I wish I had wrote this.. this is so "me"
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
it cries out to me,..... I wish I had wrote this.. this is so "me"
love Tinka
Heartwrending plea for love in your powerful, poignant words--and even if you're not happy to be here, I'm glad you're here. So there. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :(
Best wishes on finding much happiness and love
Reindeer
Eileen
Huggs, Linda
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