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God The Father
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An analogy that doesn't work.

God The Father

A father watched his offspring with some matches
Approach a leaking tank of gasoline.
He heard him say, “I wonder if this catches?”
But still the father didn’t intervene.

He heard his youngster curse the awful smell.
And light a match to bring it to the flow.
He knew that it would cause a living hell,
But still- the father never hollered, “No.”

The boy who watched his brother die in flames
Had seen it all, and asked his father, “Why?”
His father said, “Just trust me, play your games,
And leave it up to me how people die.”

I wonder why the notion still persists
That God is like the father in this story.
I can’t believe a God like that exists,
Nor can I give Him honor, praise, and glory.

I can admit a father with a plan
Who lets his children suffer if they learn,
But not a God who, even though He can
Protect His children- often lets them burn.

John H. Bidwell

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Reviewed on September 28, 2003
(((john)))

thought provoking, sad write--especially the last stanza

i choose to believe in God...what He has deemed for my life (and death) i'll gladly accept

well done--a keeper for my library

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
..Ah John..it's the FREE will..the FREE will...we keep wanting to have it..BUT.. we seem to forget the effects that some of the FREE will causes CAUSE!!!!...hmmm..yes..it's definately the FREE WILL!!!...perhaps HE should withdraw it..hmmm???

Vesna

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Excellant excellant excellant John and your ending sumise question OUTSTANDING!!!!
I am sure many will try at one point or another to logically rationalize this one and give their viewpoints and possilbe answers BUT the truth is that none are right or ever will be right because none of us are that so called "God The Father!"

Now I am off to save this to my library my friend!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Wow. (Ah, enter the logical mind, the heart of an artist, and the soul of a philosopher...)

An outstanding write, John. A clapping, standing ovation!

Tami

Reviewed on September 5, 2003
This was excellent, powerful message here,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Very well written JoHn!!

love tinka

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
John, so glad to have discovered your site tonight - really enjoying your work.

I've heard it said that when in heaven we will look back and Earth will have seemed like hell.... and if in Hell we will look back and Earth will have seemed like heaven...

All suffering is relative. Some suffer astonishing hardship and seem to have the grace to become better for it and others may suffer in small degrees and be destroyed by it... and there can be no rhyme nor reason for us to understand it.
And isn't it just like our children to question and challenge our judgement? But every parent knows that they have a much much wider view of the picture regardless of how trivial on one hand, or how overwhelming (and inexplicable in infant terms) the issues are, on the other hand.

Another provocative and exceptionally well written piece! Thank you!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
John,
Excellent piece alot of wisdome in this well written poem.
Lady Peg

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
He gave us free will and often we are subject to those who use their 'free will' for evil. Plus Satan is the Prince of this world, but his day of reckoning is coming. Jackie <> <

Reviewed on September 4, 2003
I have no answers, John, just faith in a merciful God. Your poem is beautifully written and heartfelt.

Julie :)

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
John this is very well written and makes an excellent and clearly stated point. thanks

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
Great write! The age old question how can a good god let bad things happen? Not enough time or space to do it justice here John!I'll just say, The majestic Creator who is so far above earthly understanding, due to the fact that we don't take the time to learn of him,yet he is still able to be hurt by our insults,and forgives us our ignorance.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
We don't know the answers
dear friend. Only God knows.
How often I have wondered
the same thing. Why do children
have to suffer and die? It
breaks my heart. Maybe when all
is said and done...God will give
us the understanding we need so
much.

Love,
Linda xoxo

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
This causes me to again struggle with that age old question...

A real eye opener, my friend.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on September 4, 2003
Seems a fair question to me, John. Omnipotence, omniscience and loving beneficence are hard to visualize as residing in the same spirit in light of the facts of this world.
Best regards,
Leland


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