I don’t believe that love is blind
And I’m completely nuts,
Although that is a possibility.
So let me say what’s on my mind,
And use my brain and guts
To try to tell you what is up with me.
The moment that I saw your name,
And shared a poem or two,
I started feeling differently inside.
I knew I’d never be the same
Because of meeting you,
And what I felt just could not be denied.
There are a thousand reasons why
Some people fall in love,
But you may never see a case like mine.
So easily you make me cry
Consider from above
That who I am just has to be a sign.
A sign that you’re my special one-
That this is something rare,
The likes of which have never been before.
If given time, before I’m done
You’ll know how much I care.
It’s destiny that you I must adore.
If looking for an answer now
Of why I feel this way
I only can suggest that you please start
To look inside yourself somehow
And realize every day
Just what you have been dreaming in your heart.
For in your heart a dream awaits
The time when you will know
The secret, if you hear my gentle call.
You need not wait for pearly gates
Because I love you so,
Heaven is the place where lovers fall.
John, this is heartfelt and as true as truth gets. I know whoever she is, you just left her breathless. Great write. Lisa
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
I love the gentle message in this write.
Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
John,
this is beautiful......
"For in your heart a dream awaits
The time when you will know
The secret, if you hear my gentle call.
You need not wait for pearly gates
Because I love you so,
Heaven is the place where lovers fall."
This is what I would call a PERFECT write.
Keep up the great work.
Glenna
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
:)Sandy
Love Tinka
Hugs,
Tami
of an angel.
~~Linda~~
Great work of expression.
*Brittany*
brittanyrenee.com
To look inside yourself somehow
And realize every day
Just what you have been dreaming in your heart.
..this has left me breathless..blessed is she who has captured your heart..for it is indeed a heart that knows how to love and be loved...:)
Breathtaking write...be careful now :)..YOUR soul is blazing with light...
Vesna
this is beautiful......
"For in your heart a dream awaits
The time when you will know
The secret, if you hear my gentle call.
You need not wait for pearly gates
Because I love you so,
Heaven is the place where lovers fall."
This is what I would call a PERFECT write.
Keep up the great work.
Glenna