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Words - Your Legacy
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Your words are your legacy...

The pic is a doodle I completed a while back. It is something I do while on the phone (usually over a number of calls ;-)). I am sure that a lot can be read into what people doodle. Do you doodle and do you believe it is meaningful?


Poem Artwork

Could you inspire in all that you say?
Will you provoke someone else today?
Do you have the words to describe
Are you a poet, a writer, a scribe?
Each word that is expressed

had its seed in a thought
What your mind has conceived
you once have been taught

 What will be left when one day you die?
Your words are your legacy
The what, where and why

© Chanti
 
 
 
 

 


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Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2005
A truly amazing picture
to go with this awesome poem!

Says so much with so few words. «--- My favourite kind

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
Chanti!!! I am enthralled with your doodle, it is art, pure and simple. When I was young, way back, in the '70's, I used to love to buy those cardboards with designs on them and markers to color the design, I still have a paper one, it's on my bedroom wall, a jungle scene with birds. But, one of my favorites was an abstract, such lovely nooks and crannies, loops and arrows, windows and doors, I just wanted to jump into and experience the totality. I think you could market your doodles for this type of 'artistic relief' people want, and crave, who cannot doodle so well, but would love to. When it comes to art, I am a copier, cannot 'see' what to draw, as a Poet, I am the opposite, I 'draw' with words. I can already see colors in different positions in your doodle, and I love the eyes! That is the beauty of such, it is a combined effort. The artist creates, the buyer paints. You certainly have the talent for such an endeavor, I would back you, if my poetry were making money. :)

My kids buy these all the time, but, unlike their mother, abstracts aren't their favorite, it's kittens, horses, flowers (oooh, imagine an abstract doodle of different flowers...), etc.

Nice little poem reflecting on the need for awareness of what we write and say, their is so much potential in language, the effects of words are infinite.

Erin

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
Wow! If that is just a "doodle" (I draw a pretty good stickman lol)them I'd love to see you post one of your artworks. Beautiful, like this poem. A great write.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
I used to doodle in class. lol But now
I don't too much. I liked yours though.
Also a great poem, it is a legacy isn't it.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
Do I doodle? Don't all creative spirits? I love yours. This would make a fantastic album cover. Don't mind me, I was a "flower child"...all those angles suggest that you are very analytical, the curves and circles suggest sensuality. Ditto to Robert's comments i.e. I notice that your brick wall has an opening full of light-excellent-and another can be scaled and on the other side are flowers and grass...you are on the verge of breaking through to a new conciousness. WOW. I see little gems and seeds-you are open to and are absorbing new(ancient) knowledge. Embrace your metamorphosis...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
Our words truly are our legacy - and yes I doodle, but my doodles are meaningless and childlike - yours are wonderful!

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
Chanti

You truly are one very talented lady, with words to match a truly wonderful doodle...exceptional.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
definitely not a doodle, girlfriend that is art! Outstanding work all the way around, best wishes ~Z~

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Great poem and very interesting drawing. This is not what I call a "doodle." It is a work of art. The only time I doodle while on the phone is when I'm talking with someone who makes me nervous or uncomfortable.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Well knowing how long you can be on a phone....I am not suprized you did masterpiece.......lol!!

Firsthand experience..hehehehehehehe....right?!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
exactly how LONG were you on the phone for this doodle??? LOL something like that would take me hours to do...I thought it very intriguing, as well as your write. Both were beautifully expressed :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
a doodle embodies symbolic as well as archetypal manifestations of our pysche and oversoul ... your doodle seems to seeking a path of enlightenment ...

your poem is excellent ...

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
I see revelation of your soul in your doodle. I can't believe this is a 'doodle;' it is far too intricate and meaningful. Wonderful verses as well. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
I like this one, it is a true description why a lot of us do write, to leave behind and share a part of our true selves to others. Thank you for expressing what so many of us feel.
FElix

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Chanti, when this page first opened I thought you had snagged one of my doodles off my desk. After a second or two I realized it was much more creative than anything I cook up while on the phone, especially when on hold.

Your poem is beautifully expressed. I think you have inspired many people, in many ways, and many times. ~ Sara

Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Beautiful pen Chanti. Deep thought through out

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
I found the doodle very interesting and sorta of like scrimshaw which is something that I like too. I do jewelry and find myself playing with different mediumns.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Worms having lunch on me.

Blimey wish I could doodle like that.
You sure are richly blessed.

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Wonderful doodle and a beautiful poem. The only thing we have 100% control over is our words...

Reviewed on February 22, 2005
wow, you are the talented artist besides being a poet extraordinaire! awesome job, chanti.! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Thanks for all your comments friends. Jerry I had to laugh at your comment. There ARE lot of eyes in my doodles (all of them) but I think it has more to do with my fascination with them than the feeling of 'being watched'. Do you remember the old expression 'The eyes are the windows to your soul'? People can hide a lot in their expressions but not an awful lot in their eyes. Wherever I go, I am drawn by the eyes I see. The eyes of children at play, shining with enthusiasm; the wisdom and sometimes weariness that reflects in the eyes of an old person; sadness, happiness, curiosity, intensity... Yes these are prevalent in my doodles but there are also other things. Look carefully and you will see them. The doodle is almost like a riddle.
Blessings to all... Chanti

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
I thought as Jerry did, the eyes are predominant. this is exceptional Chanti, I doodle though not in such detail, but my father used to and it was very much like yours, only his had more musical overtones. It is faxcinating and much can be read by someone who knows what to look for;-) The poem is also superb, yes words are our legacy, we shoud think more about that when we write. Thanks for reminding us;-)...
Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
You are in turne with what is happening in the world of words, that is for sure. Yes, our words are our legacy. The doodle? Aw, you know it isn't a doodle, it's art. I see a whole lot of eyes in it. Do you have the feeling somebody is watching you?

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
i'd like to believe something of myself lives on. this is a very nice message

Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Chanti,

That pic is amazing. So much detail...I could get lost in it for a while. My doodles? Can't begin to compare to this masterwork!

And your words are excellent. You inspire me, as well. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Exceptional piece...and exceptional Doodle, lady Chanti!!!
I do the same thing, when on the phone, but in no way does
it compare to YOUR art...which could sell as a greeting card,
placemat, bookmark...you name it...exquistely complicated...much
like the penner of the poem above.
P.S. Wish I'd have saved the one I did when conversing with a
person from across the sea!!!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Geez, when I doodle I draw smiley faces and little daisies...your doodling is ART! Beautiful! So is the poem. Very true. Michelle

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
A profound penning, yes. But the doodling is most amazing, Chanti. :-) WOW!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Dear Chanti. Yes I doodle at times and I do think it is a reflection of one's thoughts but I would hardly call your image, doodling. It is difficult for me to get beyond your incredible graphic creation. I get the sense that each icon is symbolic of so much. I am mesmerized by the detail. I will spend more time examining it. As for the poem, I love the flow of it; the rhythm, the rhyme. And of course, the meaning speaks of a universal truth. Thank you for sharing this magnificent artistic and poetic composition. Love.



Regis


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