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Lynne Janine Braithwaite

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An Ode to Survival
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A bucket full of words that came to me in one of my more secluded moments whilst alone on the hills of my beloved Lake District.

AN ODE TO SURVIVAL

We humans think were really clever
Some men upon the moon we place
Do you really think well conquer space?
The oceans two thirds of our planet cover
Yet little do we know of life beneath the waves


The thunder rolls, the lightning crackles
as nature throws off all her shackles.
We have the high-tech. So we think.
The lasers, holograms, the modern kitchen sink


Yet within our tiny minds there's power untold to be defined.
If only we could learn to live with one another
Then all the creatures of this planet might say to one and all
"Hi Brother"


Creatures of the universe are we, it's just a shame that we can't see.
I feel that deep in outer space someone is watching the human race.
If a mess we make of it, pollution and the like.
Then who knows what we'll have to face?


Oh yes, we think we know it all. But little do we know.
In the universe so vast, for all we really know
our planets in a tank might be, as someone else's toys.
As we keep fish, so they keep planets to please their girls and boys

Then one day they do decide to give the tank a clean
The long glass tube towards the earth does move.
"A piece of dirt I do declare" and that's the END of us!

So to our senses we must haste if this is not to be our fate
Times running out We can't complain.
There's no one else to blame

Lynne Janine Braithwaite 1994








   

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 Reviews of "An Ode to Survival"
Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on October 17, 2006
Great work
Hugs Angela

Reviewed on June 27, 2006
VERY NICE GOOD WORD FLOW

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on May 5, 2006
We humans think we have such power and control, don't we? We usually end up with egg on our faces when we think ourselves 'so superior'... very good poem.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 15, 2005
Much said here. Very nice work.

Tami

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on January 2, 2005
Brava! Yes, we sometimes lack the perception and perspective to put ourselves in the correct spot in the universe as we realize it. Nice work.

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
A piece of dirt! How fitting! Great poem. I liked it.

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
Ah, fine work...

ROdd

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
mankind always rebuild himself, no matter what planet he may find himself on...

thought inducing visions...

Reviewed on October 18, 2003
A very thought provoking piece with deep sense of truth. Thanks.


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