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Let the countdown begin...
by Zenith Elliott → (All Poetry by Zenith Elliott)
  
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Once, twice, three times or more,
I've said the words now here's ...
THE DOOR!

Four, five, six reasons exist,
Our lips no longer wish to kiss.

Seven, eight, nine hundred times,
the Lies you've told will never rhyme.

Ten, eleven, twelve thousand regrets,
those little games I chose to forget.

Thirteen, fourteen, fifteen lonely nights........excuses ignored now we
FIGHT!

Sixteen, seventeen, eighteen million ways...to make you Squirm throughout,
each and every Day.

Nineteen and twenty the jokes on you,
MY FREEDOMS FOUND AND YOUR SAD AND BLUE!

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 Reviews of "Let the countdown begin..."
Reviewed by The Dove
Reviewed on November 25, 2004
Fabulous, witty, and cute

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
You sound like Iraqi people speaking to Sadam.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Interesting write ... no mistaking the emotions. Hope you eventually kissed and made up ... that's the fun part! ~Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Hi < Nice to meet you.....lol
Thanks for your reviews....see you are from germany..welcome to my page and thank you for this fun write....I enjoyed it very much!!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Hahahahahaha, this is sooooooo good. Funny, creative and strong. I love it.

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Very clever,Z. You must have been really pissed when you wrote this one. Whatever works!
Bonnie

Reviewed on April 10, 2003
Ha! Good for you! I loved this poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
This is a great ditty! I'll be back to read more of your stuff!

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
I like it Zenith..!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
Wow Z that is so creative!I love it;-)!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
I love this ! ! ! !

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2003
Oh very very good!!!!!
Love the last line.
peggy


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