I don’t really fit;
Not even inside where I sit.
Size and shape
Do not a unity make.
I am made of rough edges,
Wild and uncouth,
Like garden hedges,
That need to be trimmed, forsooth.
Brambles and shrubs that need
To be chopped and clipped.
A wine that needs
To be savored and sipped.
Inside I find love and pain,
In addition to weakness and shame.
Like drifting dunes,
I live by ancient runes.
The thrum in my ears
Have the beat of an errant drum.
My hands are but stilled birds,
Wishing they could tingle and hum.
I write this poem,
Only to see if it fits.
Indeed, the words flow freely
The poem within me sits.
The words but sounds,
Little ships run aground.
I wish my poems had wisdom.
Perhaps they have a little wit.
My breath but wind,
That no one can rescind.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Ron
Love ya!
Jane
Only to see if it fits."
Oh it fits for sure, it fits quite well. There are so many "special" lines withing this poem. John,, in fact the whole poem is special.