An enormous hand reached down to inspect the hive;
There was tenderness in the touch and it smelt alive.
A hand so big it must be attached to much much more,
A presence that extended from Heaven’s sky to Earth’s floor.
The bees worked the hive without knowing the origin of the hallowed presence;
Ever industrious to their tasks at hand, they worked with their limited senses.
Of the mighty universe out there that reached down to them beyond the stars;
We believe what we see with our eyes, they thought, that much is still ours.
Who do you think I am? The benevolent presence whispered in their ears.
Was that a whisper, a touch, a nudge to the heart they felt over the years?
The bees didn’t know what to make of it, the mystery often felt hollow;
Something is out there, something isn’t. What’s left but incertitude and sorrow.
For all their buzzing and industry, the question continued to haunt the bees.
They know they fly on the wings of the wind that roams invisible in the trees;
But no one around can definitively account for the sense of mysterious presence,
That can be experienced in everything they see right down to their very essence.
Thunder sounds and lightning flashes; while the clouds float imperiously in the sky;
You would think the world had limits when you gazed upon daylight blue on high.
But no, even the bees knew the darkness of night reached down from its pinnacle;
Nightly, the world expanded beyond the horizon inspiring some bees to be cynical.
This is all there is, they buzzed, infinite blue by day and infinite black all night long.
We bees need not worry ourselves about it; our wings sing their own blessed song.
The rest of the hive bowed their heads and went on their business without a sound.
We know who You are without seeing You, they buzzed, gathering honey all around.
YES...THEY KNEW...AND WE KNOW - DON'T WE? I HAVE AN ARTICLE ENTITLED, WHY A FLY? BUT NOW THAT I THINK OF IT...A BEE WOULD DO JUST AS WELL IF THEY WEREN'T SO BUZZY(SMILE). THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
I believe you're trying to create an analogy with the bees being humans. The ones that I call sheeple for their timidity and willingness to subscribe to rituals and believe loudmouth others who want to run their lives.
Your "unseen hand" is, to my mind, a mental shield against fear of the unknown. In other words, that hand will take care of what seems beyond taking care of. Comforting but not real.
A wonderment of the bees tending to their assigned duties within the hive, with curiosity inside the framework of their thoughts. You played it out well, John.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
hug
Kathy
Your "unseen hand" is, to my mind, a mental shield against fear of the unknown. In other words, that hand will take care of what seems beyond taking care of. Comforting but not real.
Ron
Love ya!
Jane
thought provoking read
well done