The hatchlings looked at their mother;
She looked back at them on the sly.
The light in their eyes met each other;
Now it is the time to learn how to fly.
The hatchlings gazed around in wonder;
The sky above seemed like distant plunder.
The earth below was far away from their reach;
The eyes pleaded as if their mother to beseech.
The mother left them alone in the nest,
Snuggled together as a bundle of feathers.
Indeed, they saw her fly expertly away
Gone suddenly In sunny and rainy weathers
The hatchlings knew what was coming;
The moment of truth must finally arrive.
Their baby claws still clung to the nest.
“Jump away,” she said, “and you will survive.”
One little hatching was the last to cheep,
The last in the litter, the last to take the leap.
He had seen his siblings step into the breech,
Only the sky as the limit within their reach.
He stood on the edge of his homey nest;
His mother looked at him hopefully, in jest.
“You can do this, you are of my own,” she said.
The little bird understood, as its bird heart bled.
He took a deep breath as he knew he should,
Stealing the life force of air as he knew he could.
He raised his head, as silhouette against the sky;
He opened his feathered wings in order to comply.
At first, he was falling and nothing but falling,
Down into the abyss, his little eyes bawling.
The earth lay lazily below with its inviting lawn;
A little baby opened its mouth in a tired yawn.
Suddenly, the air lifted the little hatchling’s wings;
The bird now an angel whose heart simply sings.
“I can fly mother,” the hatching said,” I can really fly.”
Far below, a child tried to touch the little bird in the sky.
ABSOLUTELY FINE! LOVED IT FROM BEGINNING TO END. AS A MOTHER, OF COURSE, WHICH LEADS ME EVEN FURTHER BACK TO MY TIME AS A BIRD TAKING IT'S FIRST FLIGHT, I REMEMBER...SCARY. BUT HIS WIND DOES LIFT US, EVERY TIME. STILL... PRAYING FOR MY LAST HATCHING, JOHN...PRAYING SO VERY HARD. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
on the edge of the inherent instincts and just formulated mind this piece of poetry tries to mix the two together, meaning a boy's transformation into a teenager -- a complicated period of formation in the making. Cheers, alex
A great little story tale with a touching ending. It is also a metaphor that all youngsters have to learn to spread their wings and fly out into the world.
Mothers (and fathers) should learn from this lesson that one cannot confine a hatchling to the nest and coddle it. For that hatchling will never be able to leave the nest. The sooner we teach our children to fly, the better. Coddling and protecting them will only make them weak and defenseless against an uncaring world.
I found this write to be very moving indeed. I think you know why. I know a "baby bird" who was very ready to fly.............and is doing fine. I was holding my breath as your baby bird left the nest. Great imagery!!
Yet another grand example of coming into our own. Humans also need to learn how to fly in much the same way as did this last little hatchling, taking a deep breath and stepping into the void.
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
lovely work, enjoyed the read!!
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Régis
Mothers (and fathers) should learn from this lesson that one cannot confine a hatchling to the nest and coddle it. For that hatchling will never be able to leave the nest. The sooner we teach our children to fly, the better. Coddling and protecting them will only make them weak and defenseless against an uncaring world.
Ron
Michael D.
Love ya!
Jane