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Wind on Water
by John Herlihy → (All Poetry by John Herlihy)
Wednesday, October 12, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Wind on Water
By John Herlihy

The wind stirs
Drawn from a sea of stillness,
A breath unleashed
From the eye of the storm,
The lake shines a mirror,
Reflecting the morning made luminous,
An ancient shield of light,
Victorious in battle with the night.

Now the wind is upon the bay;
The waters are placid no longer.
The bay surrenders willingly
At the mercy of the wind.
The bright flame of sun
Now stirs its blood,
As if it be human
Emotions gather in the flood.

Wisps of white vapor are rising,
Remnants of dawn’s awakening,
As if wrapped in a ghost’s shawl,
Whispers amid the drapery,
The mist an unruly child,
Steaming with the sun’s heat.
The lake now set on fire,
Alive to the sparks of light’s flame.

I gaze and gaze upon the agitated waters,
Once still, now full of storm.
With the passage of time,
I become increasingly forlorn.
A barge appears out of the mist,
Carrying workers and piles of rock ore.
I am not the only one to weather
The wind that accompanies a storm.

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 Reviews of "Wind on Water"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 15, 2016
IS THIS A METAPHOR? WELL, THAT HOW I SEE IT AND HOWEVER YOU LOOK AT IT...STORMS...ARE A PART OF EVERYONE'S LIFE. SOMETIMES WE ARE JUST OBSERVERS, OTHER TIMES WE'RE IN THE MIDST OF IT BUT EVENTUALLY THE 'WINDS WILL STIR UP THE WATERS' IN OUR LIVES AND YOU DO DESCRIBE IT SO WELL, JOHN. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 14, 2016
Subtle in its sub-text and strong in its imagery. Well done.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 13, 2016
POWERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 13, 2016
as i said, you're the master of finishing, John; here, the started stanza is more than brilliant to be the gem in the rock ore of your more than 500 pieces. . . Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on October 13, 2016
U think Rebecca said it best. This poem reminded me of Trying to reason with a hurricane season be Jimmy Buffett.
Michael D.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 13, 2016
A pleasant wash of imagery and message. The subtle rhyming in this is far more appealing (IMO) than blatant end-rhyme. Peace to you...

Reviewed on October 13, 2016
You have braved your pen well and have led us to stand to face our storms like you and the barge workers. 'Love this!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 13, 2016
Fantastic poem penned in the wake of Hurricane Matthew. As usual John, you have fine tuned your thoughts and turned your words into something special.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on October 12, 2016
I love a powerfully written and descriptive poem and this was definitely one of them! I could feel the storm rolling in and my mood exactly mirrored the emotions you related. Thank you for giving me a glimpse of the drama tonight...

Rebecca


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