You have covered emotions more thoroughly than ever expected. But you have to be careful of the "fruit flies" syndrome in this glorious rendition of what these emotions mean to us.
I have often noted that "common" sense, the general thinking of most of the people, can be very dangerous if one goes along blindly and doesn't think about what is being done nor presented. While common sense appeals to the masses, it is usually uncommon sense that reaches cognitive breakthroughs.
well, that is all about the common sense which is so much common in its everyday manifestations. . . when someone promise me, saying, 'one hundred percent,' I start to be double alert ;)) because, as I can see, there is nothing natural this way. A great poem, John. Cheers, alex
"Live, but never regret;
Forgive, but never forget.
Repent, but have no remorse;
Guilt sets the mind off course."
Fantastic thought process to come up with these common sense, but hard to follow lines. You always write deep for the most part, but this, in my mind, is the absolute best.
We are far from sainthood, but God knows we try, through our poetry at times we can touch heaven's tied, I loved your pen this morning dear John, have a blessed day, x
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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Rebecca
I have often noted that "common" sense, the general thinking of most of the people, can be very dangerous if one goes along blindly and doesn't think about what is being done nor presented. While common sense appeals to the masses, it is usually uncommon sense that reaches cognitive breakthroughs.
Ron
Forgive, but never forget.
Repent, but have no remorse;
Guilt sets the mind off course."
Fantastic thought process to come up with these common sense, but hard to follow lines. You always write deep for the most part, but this, in my mind, is the absolute best.
Love ya!
Jane
Fruit flies like a banana. --Groucho Marx
(I couldn't resist)