The house was full of old silences, dark corners,
Whirring overhead fans and stairway banisters.
When I stepped into the room I immediately knew,
Like entering another time, other feelings a-brew.
The po-faced clocks hung impressively on the walls,
In this house of the dead and dying, time but crawls.
Within these walls, time showed very little moment,
I surveyed the dusty rooms feeling little atonement.
The seconds and minutes blend into hours and days,
Drifting like morning mist creating a far deeper haze.
Each of the empty rooms was adorned with a calendar,
As a way of remembrance that life is our sole challenger.
With the clock’s ticking, there was hardly silence at all,
The house seemed to be listening, holding itself in thrall.
The grand patriarch of the mansion now lay quietly dying,
The walls, the eaves, the attic, the structure itself sighing.
The spirit of the man had not yet taken leave and departed,
The house now haunted, the ghost of the man dark-hearted.
The man’s destiny held a story now steeped in exotic tea,
As the spirit of the man well knew it was now time to flee.
In his final breath, the last thing taken from him his will,
The devil waited outside, perched on a gate perfectly still.
Old silences protect their secrets to last an entire lifetime,
Their revelation aged in wooden casks filled with ruby wine.
Your last line is very perceptive, yet the whole poem is an interesting exploration into one's particular 4-walls of living, ever changing experiences broadening or shrinking said walls. Liked this arresting exercise in life and death.
You conjured up in me the end of the line for places like this. Once joyful mansions filled with family and fun fueled by wealth. But time takes its toll and eventually youth is gone and the old one under the huge confines suffers in misery courting death until it comes. Entering a place like that and breathing in the dusty smell, will take you back to where the secrets are.
Many interpretations as shown by the comments already posted.
I can relate well to this one, I had a friend years back who loved clocks. they had over thirty clocks in the house, so the house fairly pulsed all night long. many of them had different chimes, and they set them to minutes apart..midnight was always a wake up call.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
Many interpretations as shown by the comments already posted.
Ron
Love ya!
Jane
Their revelation aged in wooden casks filled with ruby wine."
Ab-so-lutely!