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When The Demons Follow You Home

by Mr. Ed — Read all 1,530 poems by Mr. Ed

Monday, July 21, 2008


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“War is Hell.”

 

General William Tecumseh Sherman

 

 

He had come from a family of soldiers

After 9/11, he, too, had wanted to serve

So he very valiantly enlisted in the Army

But war’s hell in Iraq, shattered his nerves

 

After he finally returned home from hell

His friends noticed, he was not the same

Before he left, he was a very sociable guy

Now, he wouldn’t participate in their games

 

His friends had a hard time getting him to go out at all

In restaurants, he now had to sit with his back to a wall

And although he had always been a very sound sleeper

Now he couldn’t sleep at all, instead, wandering  the halls

 

His family finally convinced him to seek medical help

VA prescribed medications, including anti-depressants

His wife and child, now fearing him, eventually left home

And now, being all alone, the demons really began to torment

 

At his home town’s gala July 4th Independence Day celebration

The sound of the massive fireworks display reverberated in his head

He soon rushed away, and locked himself inside his dark empty house

His friend found him the next morning, covered in sweat, under his bed

 

The next day, he purchased several pistols and automatic rifles

And now, he began barricading himself inside his darkened den

But those damned war demons, kept whispering to him in the dark

He killed himself yesterday; those demons finally got him, in the end

 

 

Each day now, about 18 military veterans, take their own lives;

War truly is Hell, filled with hideous demons, and mental strife.

 

 

And although I did not personally know

This tormented soldier who served in Iraq,

I have sadly known far too many just like him,

Who from Vietnam, brought similar demons back.

 

 

©2008, Mr. Ed

 

 
    The Hidden Cost of War



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Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on July 31, 2008
This is so very sad. War does take so many lives in so many ways. Some costs of war go unnoticed by those in charge.

Chrissy

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on July 25, 2008
War takes it all, Ed. Sad that people still believe that it is
a viable option to solving problems. How very sad indeed...
Be well,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
Sad I know two of these veterans you speak of or should I say knew ....

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
Most Tragic Ed...a heartbreaking write...write on! Love Holly

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
Your words share truth and sadness Ed. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on July 22, 2008
This cuts like a knife. Sad but unfortunately true. Demons haunt souls long after they had left the war scene. thanks dear Ed. for bringing this to our attention.

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Brother Edward, you've scored a big one here. Amen. You and I have known too many from all the wars mentioned here who don't go to the extent of killing themselves physically, but lead lives under the weight of the demons on their shoulders....Jerry

Reviewed by Alexandra Midnight (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
I have to say that I didnt know so many veterans took thier own lives. Great write.

Reviewed on July 21, 2008
I agree with Micke, Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed on July 21, 2008
sad poetic truth Ed, the demons are everywhere, some are just worst in worse places,

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
So true, Mr. Ed. Of late our dependence on oil bears much of the blame for this hell.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Through tears this image is much to clear and resonates for many. It is one that just grabs the heart as you try to reach out to fine men such as the one mentioned here. I do know a few that ended in this way because the demons of the past created illusionary visions that just tormented relentlessly. Pick your war, WWI, WWII, Korea, Vietnam, Gulf War and today in Afghanastan and Iraq the outcome, unfortunately for some is sadly the same.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Heart wrenching and too often true.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
this is so very heartbreaking--we should do better by them--thank you for this write

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
My fathers only brother hung himself after the World War, too much pain..he was just 21....sad sad sad.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Very sad... powerful offering Eddie!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
So very sad,and yet we continue to war as if what happens is in another world. It is surreal how we ignore the cost of war,and one wonders if we will ever find a solution.

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Yea, you said it the best in the footnote. Vietnam was chock full of these "Homeward bound" sad stories of returning soldiers. And worse, they were NOT treated as heroes but despised. Sadly, unless our leaders learn from our past history we cannot expect the 18+ something young men we send to know that WE ALL have been through this before. Perhaps we need wiser, more human leaders...

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Those demons traveled far didn't they? Destoyed many great men. Sad but true, and glad you advised us of the death rate. I did not know that many killed themselves each day. It is kind of really depressing news.

Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Powerful write, but how about helping ALL of our veterans, not just the Iraq War ones?? It's only right!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Powerful and war is hell, I've known and knew a lot
of Viet Nam vets, some died and those who came back
were never the same. All of them were close friends
and those still alive are always my friends.
They need our help and support. Great message Ed!

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Ed, powerful write...

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Ed it is a strange but true fact of war that the worst casualties of all are those with wounds that do not bleed. The very horror at witnessing man's inhumanities and devastating hatred is enough to drive most of the edge and where they land no one really knows till we hear them hit the ground.

Fee

Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Tragic - their suicides - the end over for them, just beginning for those left behind -

As well as them being forgotten in the first place - except when convenient -

A truly heartbroken poem - God be with the families going through this!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*

Reviewed on July 21, 2008
There were many like this soldier who came back from WWII, also; it just wasn't talked about or recognized. I still think if war is to be executed, let the "leaders" go do their own bidding!
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
The depths of this poem will linger in the hearts of your readers for many days to come. The trenches of war so many times torment the soul...sad death deliver them from such a evil remberance...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
a sad poetic tale Ed
But true of many returning man of war suffer
and those still suffering the effects of "Nam"
Peace Be with you

William

Reviewed on July 21, 2008
This is very sad! What war can do that unspeakable damange to a person. Many vietnam veterans are affected by the wars in their lifetime too, they suffer unspeakable damange psychologically. Even though everyone commended for their bravery, but the wars, the gun fires and seeing the faces of the dead and the agonies of being wounded has long time psychological effect that sometimes just cannot be healed. My heart goes out to his young man. There goes one life...ruined!

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
The demons are there, some get past them or leave them behind, though it ain't easy, that is at least what I find...Ed


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