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Carrying Together
by Elaine Carey → (All Poetry by Elaine Carey)
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Promising to pray

once seemed a small gesture--

The least I could do.

Now I know that praying

is shouldering my sister's backpack.

It is filled with heavy things

that will strain my soul.

Together, we will haul

this burden

to the throne

of God Who Heals,

Jehovah-Rapha.


he'll sort through it,

discarding and evaluating

and taking the weight

upon Himself.

We'll leave the holy of holies

weightless and guiltless.

We'll seek more

Pilgrims with bulging backpacks.



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 Reviews of "Carrying Together"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Truly compassionate and full of wisdom, Bess!
A splendid example to set!Fine poem!

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
A selfless act of compassion for your fellow beings....blessings to you.

Amy

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Uplifting beautiful write.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Marvelous sentiments, Bess; marvelous poem.

PS Read your Blog: Good Luck on your vacation destinations; I've made it to some of those places, but I, too, yearn to see Australia, before I'm too old to enjoy it!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Love this Bess especially " We'll leave the holy of holies
weightless and guiltless."
Peter

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Bess, I love your message here, particularly the selfless ending - a pledge to "seek more pilgrims with bulging backpacks." Wonderful poem!


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