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Clean Break
by Elaine Carey → (All Poetry by Elaine Carey)
  
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One accident, two girls, friends of my son...this is my attempt to deal. (The funeral is today.)

one accident,  two girls,
too young;


clean break for one--
no suffering,


just a catapault from this life
to the next.


(her parents tote the load
of her absence,
listen for her steps,
look blankly at her empty bedroom
But she herself
has a new address
and flawless immortality.

the other, waking from a drugged dream,
finds a crushing loss
rehabilitation
guilt
she was the driver. 

our tears
prayers and anxiety
are now for her
for  wholeness
to envelope her
body and mind.

for her, there is no
clean break,
but a fracture requiring years
of mending
at the hands of a skilled Physician.


 


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 Reviews of "Clean Break"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 4, 2003
This is painfully stark in the reality of its undeniable truth. Thank you for sharing this offering.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on November 2, 2003
My prayers are with you all....heart touchy write!!!

Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Hard breaking, praying for all. Thanks.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Bess, so sorry. there is really no comfort for such tragedy. Peace, Love and Prayers.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Prayer works Bess. This is such a tragedy. A young
life snuffed out and ended in a blink of an eye.
God be with all involved.

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
My prayers are with you and all involved. Thank you for the sharing.

Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Our family lived through this experience this past January. My blessings are with all the people involved.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
How awful, Bess. Here's hoping both her mind and her body mend quickly and completely.


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