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Brother, Can You Spare A Rhyme
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(Inspired by Yip Harburg's 1931 song of the Depression as sung by Bing Crosby and others: Brother, Can You Spare A
Dime)


They used to tell me I write good poetry,
And so I followed the mob.
When there was words to rhyme or songs to sing
I was always right there on the job.

They used to tell me I could fill a book
told me I had a golden pen.
Why should I get writers block
Just writing one poem?

Once I wrote a poem, made it a pun
Never had a problem with a line.
Once I wrote a poem,
Had a lot of fun.
Brother can you spare a rhyme.

Once I wrote a poem, its no lie,
Never stumbled over meter one time.
Once I could write poetry
Easy as pie.
Brother, can you spare a rhyme?

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 Reviews of "Brother, Can You Spare A Rhyme"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 8, 2003
It would make a great song itself...write on!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed on July 8, 2003
terrific write! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Joni Stewart-Hague
Reviewed on July 8, 2003
I like this, it's clever and originality based on fact. A unique and adroit handling of subject. Good word play. Well done!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2003
I agree with Ms.Taylor

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on July 8, 2003
This is a total gem!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2003
Londis, A song of depression to inspire a poem of writers block? How absolutely clever you are! You've even written to the same beat.. most impressive! katy.

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

"Brother, Can You Spare A Rhyme"... It is delivering a great message...

I have learned a profound lesson.

"Brother, Can You Spare A Rhyme" flows on the sea of imagination

making foam of awareness to keep the ship of life on an alert Voyage.

I have enjoyed a meaningful reading.

"Brother, Can You Spare a Rhyme" strikes the humanity of the soul,

and teaches the divinity of the mind.

I Salute the Author of “Brother, Can You Spare A Rhyme”.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 8, 2003
This was excellent, loved it!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2003
I love it !!!! It would make a great song itself. Well done.

Reviewed by Robin Spicer
Reviewed on July 7, 2003
Cool! "Sorry no rhymes to spare, already gave to the 'Puter, Nothin left to share." Seriously though, I like it.
Rob


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