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The falling tears of fall
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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I heard a sad song, guys.

 

As autumn arrives
it has brought about
a change in our lives
I am left with this loneliness
as my only blanket
I shiver as it wraps itself around me
seperating me from the warmth of you
from the strong body I once knew

The rooms are clouded in desolence
the impending end glares in silence
the winds of fall toss about the leaves
imitating your tossing away of my heart
let it fall and shatter, let it go
I shall pick up the fragmented pieces

One day, I shall feel again
but not tonight, tonight I shall
cover my wounds with a smile
I shall fiene gladness and joy
no one shall see my dismal heart
or know my desperate  soul
that autumn has brought about
with you walking out the door

 


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 Reviews of "The falling tears of fall"
Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on September 8, 2008
Denise...this is a powerful expression...well written... and sad too. but... there is always another season...:-)))) lindalaw

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 6, 2008
The seasons can indeed have a powerful effect on the way we feel and autumn (my favorite season) is particularly in tune with the soul of a "poet." Thank you for sharing your sentiments, Denise. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Valerie Roeske
Reviewed on September 6, 2008
greta expressions indeed, glad to read this , take care Valerie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 6, 2008
well expressed emotions, Denise ...

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 6, 2008
Beautifully and sadly expressed! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 6, 2008
Though sad their lingers a shred of hope that her strength will conguor all, even the desolution of losing love.

Fee

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 5, 2008
Sad yet well presented
Thanks for sharing Denise
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on September 5, 2008
I was deeply moved by your carefull chosen words. Your feelings are well written and it transported me to the picture words of your poem.
The feeling of loneliness and melancholy are overwhelming
Thanks for sharing
Alain


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