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This heart's love condition Collaboration)
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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A collaboration with Edwin Hurdle. Thanks, Edwin!

Edwin~*~*
Baby,I'm going to the ER to
have surgery on my heart today.
I'm doing this because I love you very much.
I need this surgery to become a better man,
a better soulmate and a better
human being in front of you.
I need you to be there right by
 my side through this ordeal.
They will fix my heart to put
more love in it so that I can
release my unconditional and
 undenying love for you and you only
I promise you that I will
 come out of this alive, being
stronger and romantic than
 I ever was.I will love you a
 trillion times more than ever
 before.This is the new me but
with the same old loving spirit
that drives me to you"

Denise~*~

Honey, I love you no matter what
but I feel sad, that you feel the need
to go to such extremes to please me
no one is perfect, this I understand
I don't desire to have a better man
I only desire to have you, just as you
but then again, I do appreciate
that your desire to please me
is so deep you'd go to any extreme
this lets me know that you love me
more than life itself, for you
are willing to risk your life
to make me happy
that in itself is a great
revelation of pure love
what more could any woman ask?


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 Reviews of "This heart's love condition Collaboration)"
Reviewed on January 17, 2009
"The heart's love condition" I enjoyed your Collob Denise & Edwin!
what woman wouldn't want a man such as words spoken of devote commitments?
May Your Heart Be Embraced Edwin By Some Woman There In Your City To See The Good Man that You Are!
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 15, 2009
Well done you two. Like the idea and the carry through on this.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on January 14, 2009
Edwin, it was also my pleasure to work with you on this. And if you keep being the sweet, loving man that you are, you're going to bring great joy to some blessed lady!

Hugs~Denise

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 14, 2009
Love is a unconditional extreme. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 14, 2009
A very expressive collaborative write. Thank you for sharing it, Denise. Love and blessings,

Regis

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on January 14, 2009
Beautifully expressed! A heartfelt collaboration. Good job, you two!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on January 14, 2009
You are very welcome Denise.I enjoy collaborating with you.It was an honor and a treat.I know something,I just wish a woman in my city would feel the way that you expressed in this poem.Just loving me for who I am no matter what and appreciate the type of man that I am.Not taking my kindness and the unconditional love for granted.I feel proud after reading this.take care :-)

Edwin


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