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The Visitor
by Ruan Mills → (All Poetry by Ruan Mills)
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 Fowl, intent on nature's gift 
Breakfast served, her mind adrift 
Fails to note her treacherous guest 
Here to act out nature's quest 
Creeping, crawling, closing fast 
Time's up once his shadow's cast. 

Teeth and claws to feathered back 
Red Fur mounts his cruel attack 
Helpless, Fowl cries in dismay 
Canines rush into affray. 
Wolf-like snarls and Red Fur screams 
Sounds akin to ghoulish dreams 

Blood and spit infuse the air 
As instincts fuel the carnage there. 
Canines, working as a pack 
Thwart the Red Fur's fierce attack 
Red Fur flies and feathers fall 
He's lost his prize from nature's call 

* * * 

Red Fur gone, the danger's passed 
Fowl alive but fading fast 
Canines gather, all distressed, 
Fur stained red by battle's quest. 

Watching, waiting, silent yet 
Alert, their faces, hope beset. 
Final laboured gasp from fowl 
Landscape echoes Canine's howl.

 


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 Reviews of "The Visitor"
Reviewed by Asa Seeley
Reviewed on May 1, 2012
excellent imagery

asa

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 26, 2011
Well delivered, Ruan,
with passion and energy.

John

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on September 26, 2011
Not a very welcome visitor.
Has a modern aesops feel.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 26, 2011
You have very effectively shared the conflict, Ruan; truly vivid and engaging. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2011
Gotta love it. Not from the fowl's POV, but from the heroic attempt. Now that the fowl is quite dead, it is a shame the attacker can't reap his reward.

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on September 26, 2011
....and the cycle of life continues. As I've come to expect Ruan, this is another worthy read. Love the flow of it. Well done, Dick


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