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Duel after a masked ball
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An Ekphrasic poem (from the painting by Jean Leon Gerome)


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 Soft veil of dusk weaves naked trees

Whilst Nature’s blanket covers dense

A sudden searing strike of steel

Rends stark in woodland’s quiescence

 

Blind covert, far from watcher’s eye

Provides seclusion, duellist’s stage

Seconds sought the perfect place

To vent dissatisfaction’s rage

 

Blade on blade the duellists clash

In perilous debates of strength

‘til finally a mirrored lunge

Renders both to prostrate length

 

As congregates strive to conclude

Which of ...if either ...man respires

A moan escapes one cadaver

They rush to aid the man’s desires

 

Grotesquely, crooked masks did mock

His fast declining victor’s eye

As briskly carried through the mist

His rival’s corpse was borne awry

 

Thus Poirot calls on Cardinal

To claim his conquest as his dues

Whilst Harlequin and his comrades

Dispel into the wood’s dark hues

 

Then lifted by his loyal friends

His body cold, resigned to death

And taken from this sordid scene

The champion spends his final breath

 

No witness left but distant beasts

To trample footprints out of site

‘til nothing save the tinted snow

Reveals the bloodshed of the night.


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 Reviews of "Duel after a masked ball"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on February 21, 2014
Your words are pristine, your intent precise, your meter like a metronome, sweet mistress of delight! M.True

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on February 20, 2014
Beautiful rendition of violence for honor, reminding us all that some fight for principal, while most fight for power.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on February 19, 2014
~Ruan~
Quiescence of the woods from the soft veil of dusk.
The scene is captured wonderfully with your feather
quilled pen.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 19, 2014
Today's duels are carried out with drive-by shootings. It is interesting that we would honor with a poem such a strange activity as a duel over honor carried out with swords. But these things really happened during those strange times, and you have captured the futility quite well with both the victor and the vanquished expiring. A nice metaphor for the futility of war.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 19, 2014
Such sharp, vivid language! I can almost hear the clash of
steel on steel and the cries of anguish in the death throes
of the vanquished. Brilliant!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 19, 2014
Sounds like a bad day all around.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 19, 2014
such a tragedy is written here
budd


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