The Honey Trap (poem) by Ruan Mills on AuthorsDen

The Honey Trap
by Ruan Mills → (All Poetry by Ruan Mills)
Friday, June 3, 2016 Rated "G" by the Author.

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It was said: I always thought love poems to be soppy nonsense …but then I kissed "her"

Oh my love, I love you so Your smile lights my day Your warm embrace Makes my heart race And takes my breath away Oh my sweet, when our eyes meet My heart beats like a drum Your blue eyes deep Make my soul weep With joy, I’m overcome Oh gorgeous girl, you are my world My sanity you wreathe And dare I say In Love’s bouquet The very air I breathe Oh my love, when Eros fired His sentimental bow It struck a chord And my senses roared With Passion’s afterglow Oh ‘tis true , to be with you Is all my heart desires With your tender touch That I crave so much All fear in me expires Oh my dear, I need you near Your presence makes me bold You make me strong, I’m where I belong On you, my heart is sold I still think they are nonsense ...but then love does funny things to the best of us.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 22, 2016

I can completely relate, Ruan; it is as though you peeked into my heart/soul wrote about what you saw and felt there. I love this. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on June 15, 2016

Love does strange things to us all...
It's as if we get a new vocabulary!
Lovely words...
Diana...

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on June 5, 2016

Hardly nonsense.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Beautiful POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 4, 2016

Like Paul McCartney wrote: "Just Another Silly Love Song." Love certainly strikes us in ways we least expect and sometimes creates great tension among those around us while we remain oblivious in our love.

Ron

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

You have spoken your mind, heart, and soul in this romantic write. What a fine piece to read with my morning coffee!! Thank you!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on June 3, 2016

My cup soppeth over as I swim in the pleasure of your words.
Your romantic side oozes with sensual delights! Why am I not surprised?

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

After the kissing...love becomes ecstasy, Ruan!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Ruan, this is something I could very well write, but then not as good as you do. Beautiful, and not a bit "soppy nonsense," at least not to me.