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Her Lying Tongue, His Tears Defeated
by Handsum Hart → (All Poetry by Handsum Hart)
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Please note this poem is not about anyone. When I write, I just write and pay no attention to fiction or non fiction. I simply write for the enjoyable.


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Her Lying Tongue,
His Tears Defeated
By Handsum-Hart

Each time her tongue
Gave voice in Satan’s language
Spitting verbal stones
Dripping with lies
Into his sky, darkening his clouds
Weakening the shine of his sun
And knocking him down
From his in-flight joy
Filling his soul
With tearful chirps of sadness
Like an itty-bitty bird
With broken wings
No anger did he show unto her

Rather in hellish pain
With his broken wings
Dragging on the earth
Crawl would he unto her
And let the tears of sadness
She brought to his soul
Roll down his broken wings
As the fluid of victory
That highlighted
His love for her
In a soft glow
Of beautiful clearness
Sending her lie-spitting tongue
Into voiceless defeat
With each tear
That splashed upon her

© 9-22-2004 Ronald Howard Moman
 


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 Reviews of "Her Lying Tongue, His Tears Defeated"
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 7, 2004
An exquisite write
Carole

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on November 7, 2004
Amazing! I have Never seen
anything like this from you
before! Excellent work!
BRAVO! BRAVO~! BRAVO!
Love ya!
Becca

Reviewed on November 7, 2004
Tons of wisdom contained here and love the art work also,
most enjoyable to read and one to make you think about after you read it,
Tommy

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 5, 2004
I am glad you write for the "fun" of it. That way, you're not about to stop any time soon. Much meaning in these verses, Ron. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Rose L
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Reminiscent of some of the more profound Greek and Roman myths to be found.....I absolutely loved this. Your talent abounds my friend.

So glad to be back reading your work once again. It satisfies my heart and mind.

Peace,

~Rose~

Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Handsum,

Truly an exceptional poem - abounds with excellent imagery ... outstanding write!!

Robert

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Wonderful write Ron, very profound...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Sometimes when a disclaimer is needed.....

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Excellent piece of work, Ron!!!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Wonderful theme, well done. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Beautifully written, but what a dreadful tale of codependency.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
The wisdom in this write is incredible. Fantastic write!

Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Oh how excellent and powerful Hart, This was outstanding.

Reindeer

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Loved that ending...Sending her lie-spitting tongue into voiceless defeat with each tear that splashed upon her. Great imagery throughout

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
powerful write

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
i wish it always happened this way...sometimes those who lie seem to win...nothing seems to affect them. i go back to my old belief in karma when this seems to be happening...what goes around comes around...i hope

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Wow !Ron you know how to use coals! This is a very
powerful poem depicting how truth wins when used
to overcome lies with humility.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Now this is very powerful Handsum...you made even me feel quilty!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
A very powerful write Ron.

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
This is profound. A very good poem about good over evil. I enjoyed this.


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