Woman, Stop Hiding Your Love From Your Man By Handsum-Hart
Woman, why do you hide your love From your man And let it slowly rot away Saturating his earth-time With the foul smell Of your confusion and silly games
Constant is your complaint of loneliness Yet you make your love Harder to find than a black star On a moonless night
He cries, yet you wipe not his tears Foolish woman, those were your tears Of sadness fleeing from his eyes Because your uncaring eyes Know not how to cry
He bleeds, yet you stop not The flow of his blood Foolish woman, by not stopping the flow Drop by drop You are shortening the life Of your own heart
He falls, yet you smear No ointment on his bruises Choosing instead To kick salty laughter Into his wounds Foolish woman, the pain he suffers from Is devastating your soul, with grief And you don't even realize it
So sad it is, when a woman hides Her mouthwatering love From her man, who hungers for it And instead lets it slowly rot away
So foul is the smell of her rotting love That even the maggots turn up their noses In protest, shouting there are some things Even we won't crawl on
Sadly in dream, hear I The All Mighty Chef to the angels say "If woman, turned the temperature setting Of her man's heart to endless love And placed her tender love inside Forever would she be able To warmly serve her man The womanly love he hungers for And by doing so, she would be feeding Love and happiness to her own soul"
To love and love honestly, tenderly, responsibly, and emotively, is a powerful thing -- it's everything ... when each puts love ahead of self-love, and sees the greater godly good in other ... rather than denigrating ... it's about elevating each other and 'smoothing the way each for the other'! This love is possible, and actual, when the heart opens (often breaking first), and we see the Oneness in All!!
Great, deep, true love to you Handsum!! Suzie xox :-)
Reviewed by Alexandra Riera (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
It's good too and very true (don't ask me about rhyme or metrics because I don't know a thing about it) but if you want to know if I liked it, the answer is yes.
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Great, deep, true love to you Handsum!! Suzie xox :-)
I concur with Kate, neglect on both sides. An amazing write, Ron!
...Michael
When love is held back it hurts both parties
but the one doing it the most.Great poem!
Most powerful write!!
Well written Handsum Prince Charming You!!
Love Tinka