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Jill's Christmas Wish
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Monday, November 5, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A Christmas Story


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She climbed on the ledge two lotus legs in position
waiting for the moon to cast her magic spell
Soon she was bathed in light, feeling so very blessed
amongst the orphanage children. The babes lay on their side
watching her slip popcorn lovingly onto a string of gold

"Soon it will be Christmas" she said to them with a smile
while she sang that song of old that made the angels tremble
"Remember if you are good?" but the litany was lost on
those droopy eyes that wanted nothing more then sleep
they hugged their flimsy blankets and counted little sheep

Tango the hairy dog jumped onto the ledge and panted
someone was pouring out light from a vase of silver n' white
he saw a shimmer of wings and heard a high pitch... "ping* "
his ears perked and his eyes turned to festive black olives
"what is it Tango?" she asked as the dog turned to marble

Before she knew it the room was filled with precious gifts
and her heart was warmed by the rosy blush of an apple doll
Crinkled faced, blond and pretty, this apple doll was a given
from the angels of the dream world. She wished the doll
would come to life and she did . "I'm yours" it said sweetly,

"What shall you name me?" it said while cradling the ledge
"Is my mom in heaven? Tell me Rose, I need to know"

The End.


  

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 Reviews of "Jill's Christmas Wish"
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 5, 2018
"Tango the hairy dog" "apple doll" Images like these would translate well to animation I'm thinking. Groovy visuals and atmosphere, V. Well done. r

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 5, 2018
very touching write that pulls on the heart strings.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 5, 2018
A poem story that touches the heart. Leaves us wondering if Jill's question was answered.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 5, 2018
One knows such things in the heart and no where else. That is enough.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 5, 2018
Thoughts among thoughts . . . reaching for the unreachable . . . maybe . . . but then . . . maybe not . . .


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