In the hollowed hush of heaven the whisper of a soul
and in the lit up room of stars an angel's karmic face
Two feathered wings aloft deliverance her goal
while one is seized on earth, the other portal graced
An otiose moon assembled a duty of the night
shadows of the 5th dimension casting in the light
prying dreams of splendor identity of life
immortal as the sun her beauty, sharp as knife
Relinquishing the feel of metal grates and pain
she soon portends her destiny before she goes insane
we need to catch that train she whispers in her ear
and suddenly she's up floating without fear
In the hollowed hush of heaven, an angel talks to God
while a stretcher is removed, the sky turns white to chalk
two feathers wings of might she doesn't need a prod
volte faced attuned and free she flies, to new EPOC .
Written by: Mystic Rose
I'm convinced the 5th dimension exists somewhere between
the otiose moon and the hollowed hush of heaven. Where else
would a mystic poet find it? Beautiful poem!
A nice use of alliteration in the Title Vienna. Your imagery makes one pause. "Otiose moon" "volte faced" EPOC? EPOCH? And the 5th dimension: that purported dimension unseen by humans. But to enter and stay, all emotional baggage must be left at the door. No fear. guilt, hostility, or anger exists there, and there is no suffering or sense of separation. This conjuring I believe is a mystical New Age way of understanding the Third Heaven. Thank you for sharing. All the very best... rlc
I had a hard time keeping up with all the heavenly images created by this very active process of someone rising from the dead into heaven… (Your vision)
Very well done for those who believe in such heavenly ideas.
Note: Since my husband's cancer surgery 4/25/05, this book content has been integrated into the public speaking content for audiences interested in a sassy approach to personal and/or community awareness events. Another chapbook on intimate love poet
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
the otiose moon and the hollowed hush of heaven. Where else
would a mystic poet find it? Beautiful poem!
Very well done for those who believe in such heavenly ideas.
Ron