As a human life you are so strong and so full of loving ties
and you are the one living thing on earth that matters most
Existing on this plane, a precious being with all your worth
you cause the sun and moon to light up the sky and the stars
to shine. They know the value of your gold and everyday
for the sake of you, the dawn turns up the light and every
night for the sake of you, the dusk turns down the sheets
of time. You were created in a way that is most sublime;
You are the framework of perfection with flesh and bones
endowed with a pumping heart and an energetic soul. When
you smile the world gathers in for the warmth of you. When
you dote on your reflection, the waters reflect , YOU;
A celestial body having a human experience of old. You are at
the center of a Universe made for Masters and Servants, some
of us, made of matter some of us transparent. When it comes to your
dreams, they have a right to live, so rest easy in
the thought dear one that the fate that awaits you is a good one. In good time you will realize the best gift you can give yourself, is the gift of you, to others.
Yours truly, Mystic Rose
I LIKE THE UNIQUE ASPECT THAT YOU COME FROM IN THIS WORK. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED VERY MUCH. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE,BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
Yours is a very optimistic portrait of life. I also like Picasso's quote offered by r. Cederling: "The meaning of life is to find your gift. The purpose of life is to give it away."
Underlying in this poem is the idea that there is some guiding "person" making sure that everything turns out all right. I don't think so. While the universe seems rather structured with everything following the rule of gravity and other plans, it is the wish of everyone that exists that their lives be stable and not interrupted by serendipity, serendipity happens.
Observation of the universe results in many catastrophic events that may befall us at any time whether we have a guiding force for not.
I love this! We are the power that creates worlds...
A spiritual being first .. inhabiting a human body...
We are all one and we are eternal...
The message is uplifting, and written with a
spiritual awareness that lifts my heart...
A great compositional image and a very positive message Vienna. Your thoughts reveal to the reader just how much good there is in your heart. Pablo Picasso said: "the meaning of life is to find your gift. The purpose of life is to give it away." There is wisdom in that, and on various levels I agree with him. Correction and criticism have their place, but encouragement does far more. Thank you for sharing. Regards....rlc
Regis. 🌺🌼🌳🙏🍁
Observation of the universe results in many catastrophic events that may befall us at any time whether we have a guiding force for not.
Ron
A spiritual being first .. inhabiting a human body...
We are all one and we are eternal...
The message is uplifting, and written with a
spiritual awareness that lifts my heart...
Love,
Diana...
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