A uniquely effective image. And your last line, Vienna, is a healthy goal to strive for. I resonate with the spirit of your poem, and I applaud you for sharing such a confident message. All the very best.... r
I am very much the same way, although you seem to allude to in your poem to a place of beyond this life where there will never be anything blue.
If I die soon, everyone will be happy around me and my partner will be ecstatic with joy. If I die much later I may see those close to me die and leave me. And melancholy may come into my life.
If this needless war started by a madman in Europe spreads throughout the world, I will be blue for everyone caught in the crossfire of harm because of it.
Ron
Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2022
Optimism always wins !! Great read ): and yes a spiritual reset of divine truth is whats needed also ~~
Well done and well expressed, a dream most of us all have. Covid stole two years from everyone...and I doubt if it will ever be the same but maybe we learned a lesson on how valuable time...and love really is.
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If I die soon, everyone will be happy around me and my partner will be ecstatic with joy. If I die much later I may see those close to me die and leave me. And melancholy may come into my life.
If this needless war started by a madman in Europe spreads throughout the world, I will be blue for everyone caught in the crossfire of harm because of it.
Ron
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