When an actor is said to be 'in character' it means that he has been convincing in the role he (or she) has played. You wrote this perfectly in character. Well done.
Chanti
Thank you for this glimpse of your relationship with your Mom.....its very well written.....I love poems that rhyme..but this is more than a rhyming poem......this is a dialogue.......
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
Chanti
this is wonderful
enjoyed much
William ....peace
This is very well-written, direct and very expressive.
Sandie May Angel :o)
so real.....yes!
pax
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