I looked at the back of your neck
and stroked soft skin and silky hair.
I was filled with love and maternal longing.
Longing for that moment to stand still.
But moments do not desist for the asking.
So, I placed the gentleness that surrounded you
into my mind for keeps.
I wrapped you in your lush towel and remembered.
I have a picture of you, now.
You are standing with your back to the camera,
holding your baby over your shoulder.
Your neck makes me want to touch it and fondle your hair.
You hand your boy to me and I set him in my lap.
I stroke his precious, innocent neck while he kicks involuntarily,
as babies have done since the beginning.
My heart aches with the past and the future, moving at the speed of light.
There is only one thing that is more precious than a baby..That being the stunning realization of birth. Show me a person that can witness that phenomena, dry eyed, and I'll show you a heartless person.
I love the sensuality in this Janet.
Janet an exquisite word picture of the experience with your new Grandson, and his mnother. The last line says it all, it does go with the speed of light!
Eileen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
What a very nice and revealing poem for your lovely gradbaby. Birth, growth, goodbye, but oh, the joy and tenderness we can share during the years if we so desire. Enjoyed this, your inner self came through loud and clear.
Let this coming of age story of a boy named Bean take you back to a simple time. Set in a small southern town in the 1960's, encircled by a river and gleaming white cotton fields.
Let this coming of age story of a boy named Bean take you back to a simple time. Set in a small southern town in the 1960's, encircled by a river and gleaming white cotton fields.
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Powerfully compelling, Janet. Thank you. Love and peace.
Regis
I love the sensuality in this Janet.
Lisa
excellent poetry, Janet ...
Felix
Memories are the most valuable.
A melanconic beaut of a poem..
Eileen