Time Left (poem) by Janet Brice Parker on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 30, 2005

What insight you show in the line: "Multi-colored death
falling slowly to the ground." Each word is so beautiful and exacting,I will remember them in everu Fall awaiting me. The whole work is a masterpiece, which needs to be exhibited for deep enjoyment and preservation. - Your willing student - Bill

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

Janet, the cold truth that lies within these lines gives pause to this heart to rejoice in this present time. Thank you for this.

Allen

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

Excellent Poem Janet, wrote something similar myself called Breathing.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

excellent analogy ... your thoughts flow like a cool winter's breeze onto the face of enternity ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Has a certain melancholy to it. I'm reminded of September Song from The Fantastiks.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Yes Wonderfully expressed reminder of the changing seasons.
Ice Cubes are on the way!
Peace',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

love your parallels of seasons in nature and in your life. Dawn

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

A beautiful, but bittersweet look at nature's later seasons in comparison with our own life's late seasons......written as an artist would describe the scene - as you truly do so VERY well!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Your analogy is powerful Janet. I do however, look forward to some vibrant fresh air and the beauty of autumn!;-) Superb poem! Praying your well!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Invigorating and fresh write although I doubt very much from your picture that you are in the winter of your life ...

Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Really liked the spin here at the end, Janet.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Transposing the climate change to your own personal life span is don exceptionally well here, Janet. Very well indeed.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Janet,
This makes me yearn for the icy cold. The heat here is unbearable this year.
I'm looking so forward to winter.
Thank you for letting me cool beneath your words.

Lisa