Unable to think for what I hear…
The rain on the roof so loud,
Like bullets fired from the clouds,
In rapid succession they do hit us so proud,
Trying to avoid the sound I pull over myself a shroud…
I cannot think, nor write, nor see the light,
Nothing when the rain does come this hard is bright,
I cannot hear to myself what I think,
Hope into the mud we do not sink…
Thunder vibrates my very being,
Lightening is the only thing I am seeing,
A sudden flash of daytime light,
The gods do take pictures to in the future remind us of our plight…
Unable am I to think,
Nor can I sleep; I am going over the brink,
So much noise, so much pressure,
On my mind, my neck, my cord that is spinal,
This for right now, my poem that is final…
© ed ~ 6/30/05
A new twist on the age-old question: what the hell ARE they doing up there?
Ah, Eddie M... more and more, I think we should trade places... this deafening for you is music to my ears. I could hear, could feel your distraction and frustration in this piece... obviously, you're writing from your gut. It's very real. Good work! katy xox
Well penned Ed!!
Love Tinka